for Awakening of the Hearts7/15/2019 c3 
67starsinjars
ooh this gave me goosebumps, am glad you decided to continue this as you did.
not gonna lie i have no idea how i ended up here as i was looking for a different type of fic but i loved this.
thanks for sharing!
67starsinjarsooh this gave me goosebumps, am glad you decided to continue this as you did.
not gonna lie i have no idea how i ended up here as i was looking for a different type of fic but i loved this.
thanks for sharing!
3/12/2018 c3 Guest
the first two chapters were great but the ending seemed way too rushed. it feels like this story had a lot of potential that ended up being wasted.
the first two chapters were great but the ending seemed way too rushed. it feels like this story had a lot of potential that ended up being wasted.
8/28/2016 c3 Guest
This was really amazing and I loved how you went about it. It does feel like the end may be a bit rushed but I really wished you could've given us an ending. I have plenty of ideas swirling about what happened in the end but I really would've like to see your take on it. This was written very well and I would love to see what else you come up with.
This was really amazing and I loved how you went about it. It does feel like the end may be a bit rushed but I really wished you could've given us an ending. I have plenty of ideas swirling about what happened in the end but I really would've like to see your take on it. This was written very well and I would love to see what else you come up with.
1/11/2016 c3 1Purpletshirt
It was good...i felt like it could have been something more but you were just so reluctant...it sorta ruined a story that had wonderful potential. with an inspiring author,but i hate cliff hangers with a passion it was just starting to get good to what a shame. don't get me wrong though i loved the story one of my personal favorites just bummed it feels like you gave no true ending. its like losing your favorite show it just doesn't settle nicely.
1PurpletshirtIt was good...i felt like it could have been something more but you were just so reluctant...it sorta ruined a story that had wonderful potential. with an inspiring author,but i hate cliff hangers with a passion it was just starting to get good to what a shame. don't get me wrong though i loved the story one of my personal favorites just bummed it feels like you gave no true ending. its like losing your favorite show it just doesn't settle nicely.
11/21/2015 c3 7Shinigami Merchant
This was a purely Epic story. Even though it was short you managed to cram so much detail into it. I love your writing style and the way that you were able to generate such an atmosphere of suspense between the three characters. Also I really admire how you left the ending open to interpretation.
Hopefully this won't be the last I see of your stories.
7Shinigami MerchantThis was a purely Epic story. Even though it was short you managed to cram so much detail into it. I love your writing style and the way that you were able to generate such an atmosphere of suspense between the three characters. Also I really admire how you left the ending open to interpretation.
Hopefully this won't be the last I see of your stories.
11/21/2015 c2 Shinigami Merchant
Thank you for continuing XD, I still have one more chapter to read...YOSH
Thank you for continuing XD, I still have one more chapter to read...YOSH
11/21/2015 c1 Shinigami Merchant
A lot of interesting ideas running through this story...and this is only the first chapter, I'm really impressed
A lot of interesting ideas running through this story...and this is only the first chapter, I'm really impressed
11/3/2015 c3 Raeker
Well, I'm not sure if I'm overly happy with the end... The final chapter seems somewhat... rushed, in a way. I mean, just as it was getting exciting it suddenly ended!
Anyway, this was nice. Good job :D
Well, I'm not sure if I'm overly happy with the end... The final chapter seems somewhat... rushed, in a way. I mean, just as it was getting exciting it suddenly ended!
Anyway, this was nice. Good job :D
9/6/2015 c1 BLacKxBUrN
I am kinda wishing this happens because it means more character development in Sora. They did great in Dream Drop Distance defining who Sora really is...
I am kinda wishing this happens because it means more character development in Sora. They did great in Dream Drop Distance defining who Sora really is...
8/23/2015 c2 49Shiranai Atsune
Wait, the next chapter will be the last? that was quick. Can we have, like, a sequel?
49Shiranai AtsuneWait, the next chapter will be the last? that was quick. Can we have, like, a sequel?
8/20/2015 c1 5xangabell
This was amazing. For your first time writing for this fandom, you really have a terrific grasp of all the (usually) overloading information that those games present. And, you actually nailed most of my theories too, so I honestly have nothing to offer except encouragement that you please continue this!
5xangabellThis was amazing. For your first time writing for this fandom, you really have a terrific grasp of all the (usually) overloading information that those games present. And, you actually nailed most of my theories too, so I honestly have nothing to offer except encouragement that you please continue this!
7/28/2015 c1 Raeker
Honestly, if this was a oneshot I'd have called it perfect. If Sora would have succumbed to Vanitas then and there it would have been absolutely bloody perfect.
I mean, I'd be dissapointed that it ended so soon, but honestly longer isn't always better.
Perfection in my eyes is hard to achieve, and you getting this close means this story is fucking amazing.
I can't wait to see where this goes. I write myself as well and I know how difficult it is to release on a schedule or just releasing another chapter in general.
I hope you do more of this ;)
Honestly, if this was a oneshot I'd have called it perfect. If Sora would have succumbed to Vanitas then and there it would have been absolutely bloody perfect.
I mean, I'd be dissapointed that it ended so soon, but honestly longer isn't always better.
Perfection in my eyes is hard to achieve, and you getting this close means this story is fucking amazing.
I can't wait to see where this goes. I write myself as well and I know how difficult it is to release on a schedule or just releasing another chapter in general.
I hope you do more of this ;)