for The North Wind5/19/2020 c1 
9Sir Something
This is a fascinating idea, and I wish there was more of this. You can really tell Bigby hates his father, and North has his own complicated feelings about his son, and then there's poor Jack caught in the middle. I would love to see how this would've progressed after Jack woke up.
9Sir SomethingThis is a fascinating idea, and I wish there was more of this. You can really tell Bigby hates his father, and North has his own complicated feelings about his son, and then there's poor Jack caught in the middle. I would love to see how this would've progressed after Jack woke up.
12/26/2017 c1 Guest
Nice story! It's pretty cool to see something with Bigby's father, and being able to feel a character's emotion (like in this case Bigby's anger and resentment) this well is not easy, kudos to you for making it so smooth and natural to feel! The thought of someone like Bigby having to deal with a prankster teenager is honestly one of the funniest things ever, it would be neat to actually see them interacting!
Nice story! It's pretty cool to see something with Bigby's father, and being able to feel a character's emotion (like in this case Bigby's anger and resentment) this well is not easy, kudos to you for making it so smooth and natural to feel! The thought of someone like Bigby having to deal with a prankster teenager is honestly one of the funniest things ever, it would be neat to actually see them interacting!
10/4/2015 c1 carick of hunter moon
Gray it nice to see you posting once more wecome back,
Now to review, within a story you need your reader to have empathy and concern for your character and both impending danger and escalating tension with in your plot idea
This story has eccos this you have done well to do this
Now from my memory of your early writting, I would say you have got better at writting, It sharper and more descriptive, example you can almost see and smell the cigarette at the start of the chapter.
so keep writting
Ps As to brothers if you not yet happy for them to read your work, then don't, but from what you written they do sound like they are supportive of you art work so I hope they be just as supportive of you written work good luck and best wish for the future Carick
Gray it nice to see you posting once more wecome back,
Now to review, within a story you need your reader to have empathy and concern for your character and both impending danger and escalating tension with in your plot idea
This story has eccos this you have done well to do this
Now from my memory of your early writting, I would say you have got better at writting, It sharper and more descriptive, example you can almost see and smell the cigarette at the start of the chapter.
so keep writting
Ps As to brothers if you not yet happy for them to read your work, then don't, but from what you written they do sound like they are supportive of you art work so I hope they be just as supportive of you written work good luck and best wish for the future Carick
9/14/2015 c1 FD
Sorry, I just realized that this is a one-shot. Way to go making me depressed.
Sorry, I just realized that this is a one-shot. Way to go making me depressed.
9/14/2015 c1 FD
This is freaking amazing. Y U NO UPDATE?
This is freaking amazing. Y U NO UPDATE?
9/3/2015 c1 32Lady-Miraculous101
I find it horrifying that this fanfiction doesn't have as many reveiws as it deserves. Trust me when I say this is great and if you want to you should continue writing it. I really liked the way you wrote bigby and thought it was rather loyal to the canon one.
32Lady-Miraculous101I find it horrifying that this fanfiction doesn't have as many reveiws as it deserves. Trust me when I say this is great and if you want to you should continue writing it. I really liked the way you wrote bigby and thought it was rather loyal to the canon one.
8/10/2015 c1 1Admiral Lypten T. Jones III
I thought this was pretty great and I'd love to see a continuation of this. :)
1Admiral Lypten T. Jones IIII thought this was pretty great and I'd love to see a continuation of this. :)