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7/24/2015 c1 GuardianGirl24
Great story.
7/24/2015 c1 7HorseLover200
I loved this. The whole exchange between Cole and Emma. And as I read, even though it was mostly dialogue, I could really just picture the interaction. I could hear the softness of Emma's tone, and the fear in Cole's eyes. I don't know if you meant Emma to have a soft, calculating tone, but that's what I pictured in my head. Sorry if this makes no sense, I just really enjoyed it. Well done! (:

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