for The other Lance girl7/30/2015 c4 bellapaige88
Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or fun facts, sometimes songs that the chapter reminds me of. I talk more to the characters then the writer. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy.
I thought Sara was a couple of years older than Sara
scene breaks would be great
Poor Felicity, trying to be the peacekeeper, but it’s always the peacekeepers that get hit the most.
I kinda like how you rewrote the ep
Her father is gonna freak
Nice, Tommy *rolls eyes*
Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or fun facts, sometimes songs that the chapter reminds me of. I talk more to the characters then the writer. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy.
I thought Sara was a couple of years older than Sara
scene breaks would be great
Poor Felicity, trying to be the peacekeeper, but it’s always the peacekeepers that get hit the most.
I kinda like how you rewrote the ep
Her father is gonna freak
Nice, Tommy *rolls eyes*
7/30/2015 c3 bellapaige88
Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or fun facts, sometimes songs that the chapter reminds me of. I talk more to the characters then the writer. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy.
Tommy is family - so is Felicity.
Aaaawww, papa Lance
What happened to Donna?
Good to see Tommy & Felicity are good friends - getting a sibling vice.
Moria did what! She asked Felicity not to tell them!
I’ve notice a few typo’s, but it’s still enjoyable to read.
I love Papa Lance
Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or fun facts, sometimes songs that the chapter reminds me of. I talk more to the characters then the writer. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy.
Tommy is family - so is Felicity.
Aaaawww, papa Lance
What happened to Donna?
Good to see Tommy & Felicity are good friends - getting a sibling vice.
Moria did what! She asked Felicity not to tell them!
I’ve notice a few typo’s, but it’s still enjoyable to read.
I love Papa Lance
7/30/2015 c2 bellapaige88
Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or fun facts, sometimes songs that the chapter reminds me of. I talk more to the characters then the writer. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy.
Glad to see Felicity & Thea are BFF’s
What is the age difference between Thea & Felicity.
Oliver and her are best friends *places hands over heart* aawww
Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or fun facts, sometimes songs that the chapter reminds me of. I talk more to the characters then the writer. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy.
Glad to see Felicity & Thea are BFF’s
What is the age difference between Thea & Felicity.
Oliver and her are best friends *places hands over heart* aawww
7/28/2015 c4 
5ChaiGrl
Really enjoyed your story so far. Hope we get to see the Lance's all come together soon. Great dynamic! Until next time, take care and Happy Writing!
5ChaiGrlReally enjoyed your story so far. Hope we get to see the Lance's all come together soon. Great dynamic! Until next time, take care and Happy Writing!
7/26/2015 c4 Olcity
I love it 2 chapters n one day can't wait for more
I love it 2 chapters n one day can't wait for more
7/26/2015 c4 Valerie
Ahhh I love this story please update whenever you get the chance
Ahhh I love this story please update whenever you get the chance
7/26/2015 c4 ashley2060
Omg it's so good!
Please update soon
No slow burn I beg of you
Olicity needs to happen soon lol
Omg it's so good!
Please update soon
No slow burn I beg of you
Olicity needs to happen soon lol
7/26/2015 c3 Olcity v
What an amazing story can't wait for more and. In s1 and s2 I dident like laurel either
But I'm starting to like her but she can't
Replce Sarah ask the true black canary
What an amazing story can't wait for more and. In s1 and s2 I dident like laurel either
But I'm starting to like her but she can't
Replce Sarah ask the true black canary