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8/2/2015 c5 belairdesi
Can't wait for more! I live their bond
7/30/2015 c4 bellapaige88
Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or fun facts, sometimes songs that the chapter reminds me of. I talk more to the characters then the writer. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy.

I thought Sara was a couple of years older than Sara

scene breaks would be great

Poor Felicity, trying to be the peacekeeper, but it’s always the peacekeepers that get hit the most.

I kinda like how you rewrote the ep

Her father is gonna freak

Nice, Tommy *rolls eyes*
7/30/2015 c3 bellapaige88
Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or fun facts, sometimes songs that the chapter reminds me of. I talk more to the characters then the writer. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy.

Tommy is family - so is Felicity.

Aaaawww, papa Lance

What happened to Donna?

Good to see Tommy & Felicity are good friends - getting a sibling vice.

Moria did what! She asked Felicity not to tell them!

I’ve notice a few typo’s, but it’s still enjoyable to read.

I love Papa Lance
7/30/2015 c2 bellapaige88
Disclaimer - I tend to review as I read, often answering my own questions, spell checking, adding pointless information or fun facts, sometimes songs that the chapter reminds me of. I talk more to the characters then the writer. If you can understand my reviews, then I applaud you ... anyway enjoy.

Glad to see Felicity & Thea are BFF’s

What is the age difference between Thea & Felicity.

Oliver and her are best friends *places hands over heart* aawww
7/29/2015 c4 PrewalShadeX
Awesome! Please update soon!
7/28/2015 c4 joanna-arrowfan
This is an amazing story. Can't wait for more.
7/28/2015 c4 5ChaiGrl
Really enjoyed your story so far. Hope we get to see the Lance's all come together soon. Great dynamic! Until next time, take care and Happy Writing!
7/26/2015 c4 highlander348
Oh I hope Felicity is not a damsel in distress but a badass! :)
7/26/2015 c4 Olcity
I love it 2 chapters n one day can't wait for more
7/26/2015 c4 Valerie
Ahhh I love this story please update whenever you get the chance
7/26/2015 c2 julieann.l.wilson
Great story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next
7/26/2015 c4 belairdesi
Can't wait for more! Love the bond between oliver and Felicity
7/26/2015 c4 ashley2060
Omg it's so good!
Please update soon
No slow burn I beg of you
Olicity needs to happen soon lol
7/26/2015 c3 Olcity v
What an amazing story can't wait for more and. In s1 and s2 I dident like laurel either
But I'm starting to like her but she can't
Replce Sarah ask the true black canary
7/25/2015 c3 ILoveAnime89
Aww I just love it so cant wait till the next chapter
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