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5/31/2018 c1 TheHappyDwaggon
This is an amazing story that I think you should continue. my only critique is that you cut the story short.
12/21/2016 c1 Beautiful-Liar13
I love it cannot wait for more
9/21/2016 c1 1Edmonton58
a torchic egg and how about latias and/or latios, even arceus the one referred to as sister.
7/25/2016 c1 5RedIronFang
Hmm this is very interesting. I'm hoping to write and post a story with shadow pokemon too! Anywho I'ma throw my two cents in and say that yu should totally add a ghost Raiiku in... Raiku being one of my favs in johto! Which of the three did you like though... wait, getting offtrack all things considered it's a very interesting take on pokemon.
3/23/2016 c1 1PokemonReboot
Hmm... that egg... I think it's a Fire Type. For now I'm gonna say Chimchar ;)
Question! That eevee, Angel, is she shiny or maybe a whole different "pure white" specimen?
And finally Ash knows how to fight! Ah! Finally! No more thundershocked Onix!
I loved the shadow ball part, I always thought it's odd for an eevee to learn it, still it's awesome for coverage in Little Cup. Good job on that! :D
But now, sir, I demand for moar :P
12/20/2015 c1 3macbean84
this is a great story i have like the stories of ash being rised by pokemon and this just takes it to a whole new level by having him rised by shadow pokemon. keep it up and i'll keep reading it.
9/13/2015 c1 Guest
I kinda want to see a ghost legendary in his party
9/13/2015 c1 Guest
More plz this is epic!
8/19/2015 c1 1LuxuryAndCompany
I love the story so far, I liked the original but I like the way you're going with this. I'm not going to try at guessing what's inside the egg because I'm a terrible guesser, but I was hoping Ash could get either a Shinx or a Growlithe, I really like them and it would be appreciated if you did. Good luck with the story. :)
8/2/2015 c1 pirate22
I think it will be a baby celebi or a baby reshiram look forward to more
8/1/2015 c1 1The OG Pokemon Master
You read my story, so I think it's only fair that I read yours.

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AWESOME! I love stories that are actually creative, instead of the cliche ones like the "Ash is betrayed but comes back for a
tournament." I might rant on those in an upcoming AN, idk, but you, my friend, have a GREAT story. Anywho, onto the Egg, is there any chance that it could be a Vulpix? Only reason I ask is that I would've described a Vulpix egg like that. But regardless of if I'm wrong or right, keep up the great work!
...but if I am right... Id love to see the Magby line :)
7/28/2015 c1 7FanficFan920
Good start. Will there be a political debate about Shadow Pokemon later?
7/28/2015 c1 thor94
you finally rewritten the story, good.
even if the eevee fight is good idea, i think the original prologue (with ash mother killed at home on purpose, and ash fully raised by shadow pokemon with scene of meeting, etc) was more interesting and touching.
7/28/2015 c1 1ob1292
An interesting beginning, I am eager to see what if any changes will come. For the eggs I am going to say a Growlithe. Good Luck
7/28/2015 c1 1AgitatedDog9288
this is brilliant and could ash get a charmander? Also will you be including mega evolution in this?
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