for Legion8/5/2015 c6 Guest
I'm sorry, but compared to your previous chapters, this one was terrible. The nerfing of Panacea, the forced relationship, the out of character Panacea, etc. I honestly couldn't finish reading this one.
I'm sorry, but compared to your previous chapters, this one was terrible. The nerfing of Panacea, the forced relationship, the out of character Panacea, etc. I honestly couldn't finish reading this one.
8/5/2015 c6 nebelmann
That last chapter was absolutely horrible. And it's sad cause first 5 give me hope of another good worm story.
That last chapter was absolutely horrible. And it's sad cause first 5 give me hope of another good worm story.
8/4/2015 c6 Guest
Okay... i am going to have to call this half-bad.
It's mostly okay but you rushed the relationship development WAY to hard.
...seriously, unless Taylor has a Master rating, Panacea just opening up like that is going to break Suspension of Disbelief for alot of your readers.
Okay... i am going to have to call this half-bad.
It's mostly okay but you rushed the relationship development WAY to hard.
...seriously, unless Taylor has a Master rating, Panacea just opening up like that is going to break Suspension of Disbelief for alot of your readers.
8/4/2015 c6 
1TheLazyAuthor
Awesome chapter! I hope Tayor gets all the enhancements you listed. It would be really cool. Are you going to give her bug powers still? Or are you going to give her something else?
1TheLazyAuthorAwesome chapter! I hope Tayor gets all the enhancements you listed. It would be really cool. Are you going to give her bug powers still? Or are you going to give her something else?
8/4/2015 c3 7Frosty Wolf
Not bad, though not even trying to find a lawyer to take things pro bono seems a bit unlikely, given that the school didn't pay the medical bills in this story. Just so you know though, it's Sophia, not Sofia.
7Frosty WolfNot bad, though not even trying to find a lawyer to take things pro bono seems a bit unlikely, given that the school didn't pay the medical bills in this story. Just so you know though, it's Sophia, not Sofia.
8/3/2015 c5 Guest
Sounds like Amy picked up some pride from Canberra. Watched.
Sounds like Amy picked up some pride from Canberra. Watched.
8/3/2015 c5 animeflunky
Something interesting is happening here, and I'm just curious enough to continue following along :)
Something interesting is happening here, and I'm just curious enough to continue following along :)
8/3/2015 c5 Guest
This is great!
More of this!
This is great!
More of this!