
5/5 c40 niideadequenombremecoloco
I can not believe that I read all 221,318 words of this fic.
But if you want a honest review.
Well...
If you want action, this is not your story.
If you want development, this is not your story.
If you want a competent Jhon, this is not your story.
If you want more that 2 major changes in the GOT world, this is not your story.
I came to this story believing that I would get a fic were Jhon stood uf for justice. Fo someone to call out Rhaegar for his stupidity of rebelion. But No
I can not believe that I read all 221,318 words of this fic.
But if you want a honest review.
Well...
If you want action, this is not your story.
If you want development, this is not your story.
If you want a competent Jhon, this is not your story.
If you want more that 2 major changes in the GOT world, this is not your story.
I came to this story believing that I would get a fic were Jhon stood uf for justice. Fo someone to call out Rhaegar for his stupidity of rebelion. But No
3/19 c38 Ricky
This story was so boring and cringe to read, Jon being a wuss and denying everything is unrealistic. It’s obvious he’s a Targaryen and Ned doesn’t even admit it. Such a long story only for it to end up like canon with Jon being at the watch. Btw it makes zero sense for his friends to join the watch with him.
This story was so boring and cringe to read, Jon being a wuss and denying everything is unrealistic. It’s obvious he’s a Targaryen and Ned doesn’t even admit it. Such a long story only for it to end up like canon with Jon being at the watch. Btw it makes zero sense for his friends to join the watch with him.
12/16/2024 c1 Bruh
Rhaenys smiled at the eldest girl, who saw it and silently returned it. It had been well over eight years since they last saw each other. Jocelyn Sand had her mother's dark hair and purple eyes. At five-and-ten, she already had a woman's figure and men's eyes followed her. The princess knew her as a playmate when they had been children.
Bastard surnames are given, depending on where they were raised except by some exceptions (looking at you argon the fourth) so her name should be snow not sand.
Rhaenys smiled at the eldest girl, who saw it and silently returned it. It had been well over eight years since they last saw each other. Jocelyn Sand had her mother's dark hair and purple eyes. At five-and-ten, she already had a woman's figure and men's eyes followed her. The princess knew her as a playmate when they had been children.
Bastard surnames are given, depending on where they were raised except by some exceptions (looking at you argon the fourth) so her name should be snow not sand.
11/12/2024 c40
10p.Fanster429
That ending was so disappointing. Why did it end like that? I wouldn't read this unless your ready to flip a table and wanting to bitch slap the author

That ending was so disappointing. Why did it end like that? I wouldn't read this unless your ready to flip a table and wanting to bitch slap the author
10/21/2024 c29 Guest
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6/10/2024 c40 Robert Doran
I like any story where Rhaeneys gets to live.I write too. I read to get ideas to match the plot bunnies when they start hopping lol
I like any story where Rhaeneys gets to live.I write too. I read to get ideas to match the plot bunnies when they start hopping lol
5/3/2024 c1 Guest
God I fucking despise Targaryens so much
God I fucking despise Targaryens so much
1/11/2024 c40
3Ferm
Unlike others, I found the resolution to this fic to be sweet. A tale of love across time. They couldn't be together in one life, but they could be now.
It was a really well written, creative fic. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Unlike others, I found the resolution to this fic to be sweet. A tale of love across time. They couldn't be together in one life, but they could be now.
It was a really well written, creative fic. Thank you for sharing it with us.
11/1/2023 c17 Guest
So jon snow is a bitchy crybaby , how wonderful
So jon snow is a bitchy crybaby , how wonderful
8/27/2023 c1 AHornyHorse
A brother for a sister? Then what about Ned's father and his elder brother? Did they forget about them?
A brother for a sister? Then what about Ned's father and his elder brother? Did they forget about them?