for Another dragon, another wolf, another stag10/15/2017 c40 
1tommyginger
Lovely epilogue. I had a feeling their might be "consequences" to Jon's one night with Rhaenys. I am glad the child was raised by Sansa and Viserys...if anyone would be a wonderful mother, it would be Sansa.
And, for all of the people who rooted for Rhaenys and Jon to be together ( alas, I am not really one of them ) you did give them the lovely hope that their very distant ancestors might find the happiness that was denied them.
Thank you for writing this, for persevering to finish it, for putting up with rude and entitled comments or the lack of comments, and for sharing it all with the rest of us.
1tommygingerLovely epilogue. I had a feeling their might be "consequences" to Jon's one night with Rhaenys. I am glad the child was raised by Sansa and Viserys...if anyone would be a wonderful mother, it would be Sansa.
And, for all of the people who rooted for Rhaenys and Jon to be together ( alas, I am not really one of them ) you did give them the lovely hope that their very distant ancestors might find the happiness that was denied them.
Thank you for writing this, for persevering to finish it, for putting up with rude and entitled comments or the lack of comments, and for sharing it all with the rest of us.
10/15/2017 c40 2Hektols
Interesting way to show what happened with everyone.
It was really reckless from Jon's part to write the part where Ned reveals his true heritage, if anybody found it it could have caused a ruckus that would have made his sacrifice worthless. I wonder if Ned told Catelyn the truth before she died so she would meet the Seven knowing that her husband was always faithful to her.
A thousand years later the world of Westeros finally got out from the medieval stasis it has been for thousands of years and finally changed, it would have been interesting to see what triggered it.
2HektolsInteresting way to show what happened with everyone.
It was really reckless from Jon's part to write the part where Ned reveals his true heritage, if anybody found it it could have caused a ruckus that would have made his sacrifice worthless. I wonder if Ned told Catelyn the truth before she died so she would meet the Seven knowing that her husband was always faithful to her.
A thousand years later the world of Westeros finally got out from the medieval stasis it has been for thousands of years and finally changed, it would have been interesting to see what triggered it.
10/15/2017 c40 1Amoymon
Meh wasn't a great ending, wasn't bittersweet and pretty unimaginative. This could've gone better then skipping the years from this chapter and the last one.
1AmoymonMeh wasn't a great ending, wasn't bittersweet and pretty unimaginative. This could've gone better then skipping the years from this chapter and the last one.
10/6/2017 c39 Abhi
U fucked up a good story is not a bit like Jon ,he would have taken some time but he would have accepted that he is targaryen.I expected that he will die then revived by melisandre,defeated the White Walkers and then married Rhaenys.I wonder what made u to give this such a bad Jon would have accepted that he is targaryen then there would have no civil are also immune to fire which would have made him believe that he is first half was good but you ruined it.
U fucked up a good story is not a bit like Jon ,he would have taken some time but he would have accepted that he is targaryen.I expected that he will die then revived by melisandre,defeated the White Walkers and then married Rhaenys.I wonder what made u to give this such a bad Jon would have accepted that he is targaryen then there would have no civil are also immune to fire which would have made him believe that he is first half was good but you ruined it.
10/6/2017 c39 Guest
is Rhaenys pregnant with jons child?
is Rhaenys pregnant with jons child?
10/6/2017 c39 varush71
Wow.. Wish rhaenys and jon married tho.. I dont like the ending sorry but the rest were written beautifully.. That ending came out of nowhere
Wow.. Wish rhaenys and jon married tho.. I dont like the ending sorry but the rest were written beautifully.. That ending came out of nowhere
10/3/2017 c39 Avenger Ned
Ned Stark wins, humiliates the lizards. He had his revenge on his sister whore and destroyed the filthy bastard.
That is the life that deserved that twit of Jon, a life in the hell.
Ned is filled with grandchildren, mocking the stupid bastard.
Ned Stark wins, humiliates the lizards. He had his revenge on his sister whore and destroyed the filthy bastard.
That is the life that deserved that twit of Jon, a life in the hell.
Ned is filled with grandchildren, mocking the stupid bastard.
10/3/2017 c39 ThelonewolfNT
That I was not expecting at all in the end. I am generally surprised at this one. Great story.
That I was not expecting at all in the end. I am generally surprised at this one. Great story.
10/3/2017 c39 Amoymon
Pretty decent, didn't expect the decades jump to happen. Expected a longer story. But this was certinaly a bittersweet chapter, which is good.
Pretty decent, didn't expect the decades jump to happen. Expected a longer story. But this was certinaly a bittersweet chapter, which is good.
10/3/2017 c39 Dark Dragon Tamer
I'm seeing where this story is going. It seems a shame to come so far and stop reading at the second last chapter, but that's what I will do.
I will say this, this story doesn't meet up to the standards of Bodyguard of Azula, the only other story of yours I read.
Many spelling mistakes, grammatical errors and the plot is just a bit...wonky.
I'm seeing where this story is going. It seems a shame to come so far and stop reading at the second last chapter, but that's what I will do.
I will say this, this story doesn't meet up to the standards of Bodyguard of Azula, the only other story of yours I read.
Many spelling mistakes, grammatical errors and the plot is just a bit...wonky.