
6/3 c75 opalfeather
That scene at the very end was I think my favorite way I’ve ever seen it written. It was so tastefully written that I got to enjoy the characters and the feeling of conclusion that it brought rather than focusing on the act. It was just the perfect amount of awkward are sweet and just a little bit difficult that it felt genuine. I’ve really enjoyed this book and if you ever come back to it or the fandom I would be elated to follow a journey of yours for as many as you are willing to create. Thank you for a wonderful experience over the two weeks I’ve spent binging this. I’m sure I will come back to read it again and again. Thank you.
That scene at the very end was I think my favorite way I’ve ever seen it written. It was so tastefully written that I got to enjoy the characters and the feeling of conclusion that it brought rather than focusing on the act. It was just the perfect amount of awkward are sweet and just a little bit difficult that it felt genuine. I’ve really enjoyed this book and if you ever come back to it or the fandom I would be elated to follow a journey of yours for as many as you are willing to create. Thank you for a wonderful experience over the two weeks I’ve spent binging this. I’m sure I will come back to read it again and again. Thank you.
5/16 c1 sandrapark276
i have to binge read this story all over again just cuz I can't wait for the next update, cliffhangers are my weakness.
i have to binge read this story all over again just cuz I can't wait for the next update, cliffhangers are my weakness.
4/11 c75 Master777vip0000
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4/8 c27 UltimateSimp546
I take it back Gozen-san seems interesting I'm taking quite the liking to her
I take it back Gozen-san seems interesting I'm taking quite the liking to her
4/8 c26 UltimateSimp546
Gozen-san seems okay I guess can't really tell if I dislike her or like her but I could say this she's wise
Gozen-san seems okay I guess can't really tell if I dislike her or like her but I could say this she's wise
4/8 c21 UltimateSimp546
YES! GENMA BABY! RAIDO BELOVED! HAYATE IT'S SO SAD THAT YOU DIED! I JUST NOTICED GAARA ACTUALLY HAS NO EYEBROWS!
YES! GENMA BABY! RAIDO BELOVED! HAYATE IT'S SO SAD THAT YOU DIED! I JUST NOTICED GAARA ACTUALLY HAS NO EYEBROWS!
4/7 c20 UltimateSimp546
I'm glad someone at least told Naruto how stupid it was to do that AND JUST A FEW BRUISES BITCH DID YOU NOW HEAR THE MEDICAL NINJA SAY HER INJURIES CUZ IF YOU THINK THAT THAT'S JUST A FEW BRUISES THAN YOU MIGHT BE DEAFER THEN MY BROTHER!
I'm glad someone at least told Naruto how stupid it was to do that AND JUST A FEW BRUISES BITCH DID YOU NOW HEAR THE MEDICAL NINJA SAY HER INJURIES CUZ IF YOU THINK THAT THAT'S JUST A FEW BRUISES THAN YOU MIGHT BE DEAFER THEN MY BROTHER!
4/6 c8 UltimateSimp546
Me that didn't understand some stuff: I don't understand anything but I'll act like I do!
Me that didn't understand some stuff: I don't understand anything but I'll act like I do!
4/5 c3 UltimateSimp546
I like Masa he seems nice! AND IS KAKABAKA ACTUALLY GOING TO BE A GOOD SENSEI!
I like Masa he seems nice! AND IS KAKABAKA ACTUALLY GOING TO BE A GOOD SENSEI!
2/11 c27
2FieldMarshal1915
needs of my village
Tsunade you've not cared about the leaf's needs for like 10-20 years

needs of my village
Tsunade you've not cared about the leaf's needs for like 10-20 years
2/8 c20 jesstersmasque
So... she didn't get the bridge name, OK fine. The story hadn't butterflyed enough yet. But now she has all this experience and extra skill and she faces down someone different- and still gets knocked out of the exam? I've been enjoying the story but honestly I'm now wondering what's the point? Her being stronger means nothing if cannon just railroads her into the same places. I don't mean to be overly critical because the writing is excellent but I've just had all my enthusiasm drained entirely.
So... she didn't get the bridge name, OK fine. The story hadn't butterflyed enough yet. But now she has all this experience and extra skill and she faces down someone different- and still gets knocked out of the exam? I've been enjoying the story but honestly I'm now wondering what's the point? Her being stronger means nothing if cannon just railroads her into the same places. I don't mean to be overly critical because the writing is excellent but I've just had all my enthusiasm drained entirely.