for The Trials of a Lioness12/16/2024 c1 jaylenehemmings4
The ending was such a disappointment so rushed ans sloppy was amaizng till that way to ruin a good book
The ending was such a disappointment so rushed ans sloppy was amaizng till that way to ruin a good book
5/19/2022 c24 ScoripoScreamQueen
Im sorry but are you intentionally writing Hazel this way?What kind of girlfriend is she that she talks about another guy she gave a BJ to in front of her current Boyfriend? Furthermore why does she continually make decisions that are bad ? I know teens are kinda dumb but she’s beyond that. I’m sorry but she is the most unlikeable Oc I have ever read .
Im sorry but are you intentionally writing Hazel this way?What kind of girlfriend is she that she talks about another guy she gave a BJ to in front of her current Boyfriend? Furthermore why does she continually make decisions that are bad ? I know teens are kinda dumb but she’s beyond that. I’m sorry but she is the most unlikeable Oc I have ever read .
5/19/2022 c15 ScoripoScreamQueen
Haven’t read this since it was originally posted, but Dang Hazel is not only a complete train wreck, she’s also a pick me girl. Kinda cringy lmao
Haven’t read this since it was originally posted, but Dang Hazel is not only a complete train wreck, she’s also a pick me girl. Kinda cringy lmao
4/21/2020 c32 
5wedontkilltheliving
Absolutely loved this story and devoured it in a weekend instead of studying for my exams. You captured the characters so perfectly, it was an absolute pleasure to read it. Thank you!
5wedontkillthelivingAbsolutely loved this story and devoured it in a weekend instead of studying for my exams. You captured the characters so perfectly, it was an absolute pleasure to read it. Thank you!
11/4/2018 c32 Antrastea
Woah... so I read this through during the last week and I enjoyed it very much. I have to admit that in between Hazel was gettin a bit on my nerves and I was relieved as you changed a bit because of that one guest mentioning that the behavior of both wasn't very adult-like.
Really, I felt sorry for Fred so often because Hazel did those stupid things. I mean... she DID fall for nearly every boy that look good in her opinion and was a bit nice to her. And she did blame Fred for not telling her that he loved her immediatly, while she herself did the same thing. So... there were a lot of situations when I was a bit annoyed and I could understand Allegra at some point (though how Allegra dealt with it really was mean). BUT I was happy how it turned out at the end and I really appreciated that her own plans didn't turn out the way she wanted because thats reality right? (but seriously, she made the right decision regarding her grandparents)
And I like how she matured in the end and thats what a story is about: the development of the characters.
I FELL SO HARD FOR THE TWINS IN YOUR STORY!
So I guess I will read your Sirius story next. Keep up the writing! Greetings from Germany!
Woah... so I read this through during the last week and I enjoyed it very much. I have to admit that in between Hazel was gettin a bit on my nerves and I was relieved as you changed a bit because of that one guest mentioning that the behavior of both wasn't very adult-like.
Really, I felt sorry for Fred so often because Hazel did those stupid things. I mean... she DID fall for nearly every boy that look good in her opinion and was a bit nice to her. And she did blame Fred for not telling her that he loved her immediatly, while she herself did the same thing. So... there were a lot of situations when I was a bit annoyed and I could understand Allegra at some point (though how Allegra dealt with it really was mean). BUT I was happy how it turned out at the end and I really appreciated that her own plans didn't turn out the way she wanted because thats reality right? (but seriously, she made the right decision regarding her grandparents)
And I like how she matured in the end and thats what a story is about: the development of the characters.
I FELL SO HARD FOR THE TWINS IN YOUR STORY!
So I guess I will read your Sirius story next. Keep up the writing! Greetings from Germany!
8/31/2018 c24 4Ami of Resplendence
...when do they work?! I almost cried in the last two chapters (which means you are doing an incredible job writing) :)
4Ami of Resplendence...when do they work?! I almost cried in the last two chapters (which means you are doing an incredible job writing) :)
8/31/2018 c15 Ami of Resplendence
I nearly did swoon when I googled Gaspard Ulliel. I love the story so far. It's brilliant.
I nearly did swoon when I googled Gaspard Ulliel. I love the story so far. It's brilliant.
5/14/2018 c32 7EviColt
I seriously loved this fic so much. I am mindblown. You did a brilliant job and I can guarantee this will be one of my favorites forever.
7EviColtI seriously loved this fic so much. I am mindblown. You did a brilliant job and I can guarantee this will be one of my favorites forever.
5/11/2018 c32 3neffa
i was def hoping for a sequel but honestly this entire fic was brilliant and beautiful and i’m so glad i read it
3neffai was def hoping for a sequel but honestly this entire fic was brilliant and beautiful and i’m so glad i read it
5/11/2018 c30 neffa
IM SO HAPPY SHE TOLD HIM OFF OMFG. HE WAS SUCH AN ASSHOLE. also loltalking out of ur ass
IM SO HAPPY SHE TOLD HIM OFF OMFG. HE WAS SUCH AN ASSHOLE. also loltalking out of ur ass
5/11/2018 c27 neffa
creative license and all, but i wanted to let you know that a couple chapters ago you mentioned neither of the twins got OWLs in potions, and in this one, Fred and Hazel are in said class
just so you know
creative license and all, but i wanted to let you know that a couple chapters ago you mentioned neither of the twins got OWLs in potions, and in this one, Fred and Hazel are in said class
just so you know