for The Trials of a Lioness9/26/2015 c19 Noface
I was expecting a little more resistance from Fred, but I guess no drama means more time for romance~!
I was expecting a little more resistance from Fred, but I guess no drama means more time for romance~!
9/26/2015 c19 MissesE
You write the best story on here! Xd I hope Fred won't get to know about the bet, I really want them to work things out :) they deserve it! But it is all so exciting when he gets jealous and she's confused and everybody is getting butterflies in their stomach xd as do I when I read this :)
You write the best story on here! Xd I hope Fred won't get to know about the bet, I really want them to work things out :) they deserve it! But it is all so exciting when he gets jealous and she's confused and everybody is getting butterflies in their stomach xd as do I when I read this :)
9/26/2015 c19 
12HazelVex
Great as usual and FINALLY! I am beyond happy they've finally reconciled- I can't wait for them to get together.
12HazelVexGreat as usual and FINALLY! I am beyond happy they've finally reconciled- I can't wait for them to get together.
9/25/2015 c19 Cyd1991
Yes! Thanks for posting this, had enough quiet time on the bus to enjoy it. Loved that Hazel and Fred love love it! I'm glad she got rid of the blood french man! :) but I'm also glad that they aren't on bad terms. Such great writing! Oh and the Dr. Horrible sing along quote at the end! Priceless! So in my Oliver twist voice I'll ask "please meg... I want some more" :)
Yes! Thanks for posting this, had enough quiet time on the bus to enjoy it. Loved that Hazel and Fred love love it! I'm glad she got rid of the blood french man! :) but I'm also glad that they aren't on bad terms. Such great writing! Oh and the Dr. Horrible sing along quote at the end! Priceless! So in my Oliver twist voice I'll ask "please meg... I want some more" :)
9/23/2015 c18 Cyd1991
Damn! I knew that Felix was going to cloud her judgement. I'm very happy Fred FINALLY said something about the way he feels. Look how intense the kissing scenes are :) very great detail. I still have high hopes for Fred and Hazel! Oooh I watched deathly hallows part two and I cried. Your writing made me connect way more with Fred. I was thinking " Hazel's going to be heartbroken" bloooodyyy good!
Damn! I knew that Felix was going to cloud her judgement. I'm very happy Fred FINALLY said something about the way he feels. Look how intense the kissing scenes are :) very great detail. I still have high hopes for Fred and Hazel! Oooh I watched deathly hallows part two and I cried. Your writing made me connect way more with Fred. I was thinking " Hazel's going to be heartbroken" bloooodyyy good!
9/22/2015 c18 6Naida of the Rain
Oh god, you're trying to kill me aren't you? I love everything about this chapter. I want to like Felix, but I also want him to be a slimy bastard and have him really use Hazel advantageously. That way Fred can confront him and punch his lights out. But this may be because I'm obsessed with Fred Weasley soooo... ;) Anyway, phenomenal as always love! Keep up the amazing work!
6Naida of the RainOh god, you're trying to kill me aren't you? I love everything about this chapter. I want to like Felix, but I also want him to be a slimy bastard and have him really use Hazel advantageously. That way Fred can confront him and punch his lights out. But this may be because I'm obsessed with Fred Weasley soooo... ;) Anyway, phenomenal as always love! Keep up the amazing work!
9/22/2015 c18 MissesE
No you give us rainbow unicorn butterfly kisses with your chapters! Xd I knew Felix was going to mess things up, but honestly I'm quite beginning to like the lad xd he can't help it hazel is as indecisive as I am In front of an all you can eat buffet! No seriously, I hope she manages to patch things up with Fred (and real good!) .. Until that time she's a free woman ;)
No you give us rainbow unicorn butterfly kisses with your chapters! Xd I knew Felix was going to mess things up, but honestly I'm quite beginning to like the lad xd he can't help it hazel is as indecisive as I am In front of an all you can eat buffet! No seriously, I hope she manages to patch things up with Fred (and real good!) .. Until that time she's a free woman ;)
9/22/2015 c18 16Hummelberry94
This is so good! I love that Hazel is getting to know and like Julia. I think she will be good for Hazel. Fred and Hazel forever!
16Hummelberry94This is so good! I love that Hazel is getting to know and like Julia. I think she will be good for Hazel. Fred and Hazel forever!
9/21/2015 c18 10WildestDreams95
Meeeeeppppp. First, your portrayl of Bill was great; loved it. Next, each & every one of your kiss scenes, including that bit with Felix in this chapter, lights my skin on fire & makes me feel all tingly. Take that as a sign that you are an amazing writer, cause you are. I like Hazel's choice at the end, & as a child of divorce with remarried parents, I love how you deal with the whole mom/stepmom thing. That was fantastic. I'm obviously frustrated that Hazel & Fred aren't together yet, but honestly you've made the best plot choice for your story & their relationship so far. I love it! Update soon please! I'd also love for you to check out my stories & give reviews/advice, because it's make me a much better writer! :)
Lots of Love,
WildestDreams72394
10WildestDreams95Meeeeeppppp. First, your portrayl of Bill was great; loved it. Next, each & every one of your kiss scenes, including that bit with Felix in this chapter, lights my skin on fire & makes me feel all tingly. Take that as a sign that you are an amazing writer, cause you are. I like Hazel's choice at the end, & as a child of divorce with remarried parents, I love how you deal with the whole mom/stepmom thing. That was fantastic. I'm obviously frustrated that Hazel & Fred aren't together yet, but honestly you've made the best plot choice for your story & their relationship so far. I love it! Update soon please! I'd also love for you to check out my stories & give reviews/advice, because it's make me a much better writer! :)
Lots of Love,
WildestDreams72394
9/19/2015 c17 Guest
Yes I do think it deserves a review. I'm glad that they're finally getting to starting a relationship, even if they were drunk.
Yes I do think it deserves a review. I'm glad that they're finally getting to starting a relationship, even if they were drunk.
9/19/2015 c17 Guest
YAYYY THEYRE TOGETHER :)))
YAYYY THEYRE TOGETHER :)))