for The Trials of a Lioness9/2/2015 c11 mamba.pon
I have to say, I read all of these chapters in one night.
I haven't read a fanfic that I have loved and adored and wanted to keep reading and not stop for such a long time.
This is a really enjoyable read, and the interactions between the characters are so believable and genuine. I live for the small moments of affection, like in one of the chapters where Fred places his hand on her knee and she feels an electric current go through her. It feels like re-living a first love or 'first flirtation' and those are beautiful moments that are rarely created in fanfiction because everyone wants to get to the 'good' bit.
I'm really enjoying Hazels journey, and I cannot wait to read more. There's something about how you write that makes it flow so well, I'm not left confused at the end of sentences, and I feel that that there is the perfect amount of description; it's not over detailed nor lacking in substance - it's just right.
I really, really, really love this story. I'm so glad I decide to start reading fanfiction again.
I have to say, I read all of these chapters in one night.
I haven't read a fanfic that I have loved and adored and wanted to keep reading and not stop for such a long time.
This is a really enjoyable read, and the interactions between the characters are so believable and genuine. I live for the small moments of affection, like in one of the chapters where Fred places his hand on her knee and she feels an electric current go through her. It feels like re-living a first love or 'first flirtation' and those are beautiful moments that are rarely created in fanfiction because everyone wants to get to the 'good' bit.
I'm really enjoying Hazels journey, and I cannot wait to read more. There's something about how you write that makes it flow so well, I'm not left confused at the end of sentences, and I feel that that there is the perfect amount of description; it's not over detailed nor lacking in substance - it's just right.
I really, really, really love this story. I'm so glad I decide to start reading fanfiction again.
8/31/2015 c11 Cyd1991
Omg omg! Yes! I'm so glad I knew you were leading up to something great! I'm so excited. As I'm reading I can picture everything happening like it was a movie. I love sirius and I'm so glad she gets to meet him! Great job megg!
Omg omg! Yes! I'm so glad I knew you were leading up to something great! I'm so excited. As I'm reading I can picture everything happening like it was a movie. I love sirius and I'm so glad she gets to meet him! Great job megg!
8/28/2015 c10 Cyd1991
Hey Meggo! I'm so glad you posted another chapter my day was very dull until I got the update. Again another fantastic job with this chapter. I feel like everything is leading up to something great. I love Fred so much in your story he's very brave and doesn't think twice when it comes to Hazel. Perfect job :) keep em coming!
Hey Meggo! I'm so glad you posted another chapter my day was very dull until I got the update. Again another fantastic job with this chapter. I feel like everything is leading up to something great. I love Fred so much in your story he's very brave and doesn't think twice when it comes to Hazel. Perfect job :) keep em coming!
8/25/2015 c9 MissesE
you, dear writer, have gained yourself a new faithful follower :D i really really love the story so far and how sweet and indeed devious fred is can't wait for future chapters! and you write amazingly well btw!
you, dear writer, have gained yourself a new faithful follower :D i really really love the story so far and how sweet and indeed devious fred is can't wait for future chapters! and you write amazingly well btw!
8/24/2015 c9 Cyd1991
This is actually the first fan fiction I've read religiously. I can definitely tell that you've paid attention to detail and really developed these characters well. For instance your "Fred" and "George" flow perfectly with the original Fred and George. Hazel is amazing, I love her personality and I can't wait to see how the story unfolds. I always thought of what the other students were experiencing behind all of the Harry Potter craziness.. It's nice to have some light shed on those areas :) you're definitely a great writer and I appreciate your talents! Keep up the good work!
This is actually the first fan fiction I've read religiously. I can definitely tell that you've paid attention to detail and really developed these characters well. For instance your "Fred" and "George" flow perfectly with the original Fred and George. Hazel is amazing, I love her personality and I can't wait to see how the story unfolds. I always thought of what the other students were experiencing behind all of the Harry Potter craziness.. It's nice to have some light shed on those areas :) you're definitely a great writer and I appreciate your talents! Keep up the good work!
8/24/2015 c8 Cyd1991
Again another great chapter. You definitely know how to paint a picture with words :) I was so eager to keep reading! Thanks for posting again.
Again another great chapter. You definitely know how to paint a picture with words :) I was so eager to keep reading! Thanks for posting again.
8/20/2015 c7 Cyd1991
So I just spent the last two days reading all seven chapters that you've posted. I would like to thank you for keeping the magic alive! I'm a huge fan of Harry Potter and you kept it going for me. Hazel's character is well developed and I could picture the whole story because of how well you've painted it. I really love how you expanded the story and made Hazel real. Keep up the great work!
So I just spent the last two days reading all seven chapters that you've posted. I would like to thank you for keeping the magic alive! I'm a huge fan of Harry Potter and you kept it going for me. Hazel's character is well developed and I could picture the whole story because of how well you've painted it. I really love how you expanded the story and made Hazel real. Keep up the great work!
8/18/2015 c1 NewFicReader
This is my first time reading fan fiction, and I am very impressed.
The story is well written, easy to follow and flows really well. You create a scene that is easy to picture in the head and give your characters background and purpose. I would be very interested in reading some original work too.
Thank you so much for beginning this wonderful story, I look forward to reading more about Hazel's time at Howarts!
Cheers!
This is my first time reading fan fiction, and I am very impressed.
The story is well written, easy to follow and flows really well. You create a scene that is easy to picture in the head and give your characters background and purpose. I would be very interested in reading some original work too.
Thank you so much for beginning this wonderful story, I look forward to reading more about Hazel's time at Howarts!
Cheers!
8/17/2015 c6 ujgvyhkbnk
When Fred punched I clapped. But I'm wondering just now, she can tell which one is Fred and which one is George?
When Fred punched I clapped. But I'm wondering just now, she can tell which one is Fred and which one is George?
8/17/2015 c6 
3EvelinaRose
This is a really great story! It's well-written, which is nice because you come across a lot of fanfiction that is not-so well-written. I also truly enjoy the encounters between the characters and i like seeing Fred and Hazel's relationship evolve. Can't wait to read more! :)
3EvelinaRoseThis is a really great story! It's well-written, which is nice because you come across a lot of fanfiction that is not-so well-written. I also truly enjoy the encounters between the characters and i like seeing Fred and Hazel's relationship evolve. Can't wait to read more! :)
8/12/2015 c4 Crimsonwater5
Love the story so far! Can't wait for more! Please keep posting!
Love the story so far! Can't wait for more! Please keep posting!
8/8/2015 c3 Cmnewman
"Ahh! No Hazel! Don't do it, he's an absolute wanker! Wait for the Weasley" Please please please have the twins burst through the door at this point, (because Oliver was drunk enough to leave her note on his door for them to find) and have Fred sock him right in his beautiful smug wanker face. Lol In all seriousness though, love this fic so far :) keep up the lovely work!
"Ahh! No Hazel! Don't do it, he's an absolute wanker! Wait for the Weasley" Please please please have the twins burst through the door at this point, (because Oliver was drunk enough to leave her note on his door for them to find) and have Fred sock him right in his beautiful smug wanker face. Lol In all seriousness though, love this fic so far :) keep up the lovely work!
8/1/2015 c1 7BananaBubbles98
I like how I can tell that the OC is different than most others that have been written already. I can't wait to see where you take this story!
7BananaBubbles98I like how I can tell that the OC is different than most others that have been written already. I can't wait to see where you take this story!