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4/9/2017 c30 2Raven that flies at night
Good job hazel. Show them what you are made of.
4/9/2017 c30 JustDreamAboutIt
Wait... so you're saying there are only 3 or 4 chapters left? What in tarnation?! Will there be a sequel? Will it end right after Deathly Hallows? *cries* I'm so concerned!
4/9/2017 c30 zaneri0t
Im so happy you're back. Amazing chapter and amazing direction.
8/23/2016 c29 1confusedoutofmymind
I seriously wish Hazel would remove her head from her arse and just be with Fred!
8/17/2016 c29 22DGMSilverAirHead03
Excellent job as per usual. I'm really proud of Hazel.
8/10/2016 c29 Guest
please update soon! i have just discovored this story today (well now it's technically yesterday, you'll see later) and it was so good I HAD to read the whole thing altogether.I started pretty late and since you wrote wonderful long chapters it took me a whle to read so here I am at 12:37 AM (that's why I said technically yesterday) just finished reading your story. Hope you know this story had me whisked off to another world just like all good stories :)
8/11/2016 c29 2Snowgirl7589
Couldn't remember which chapter I'd left off on, so I decided to re read the whole thing. It's just as good the second time! Look forward to the next chapter.
8/8/2016 c29 Guest
Brilliant as always! Looking forward to the next chapter!
8/9/2016 c29 Hagridinaponcho
Oh. My. God.
You have no idea how excited I was when I saw you had updated. For a moment I was like what's that one? I don't remember that. But then...
AMAZING.
Your writing continues to be as fabulous as ever and as much as I wish you would update a teensy bit more then every two months, I also appreciate that such master pieces take time, so I therefore will not ask you to hurry yourself if it were to mean the quality is sacrificed.
May I perhaps offer some form of suggestion towards the direction of the storyline?
I personally think that you have to be careful not to drag out the 'bad blood' between Hazel and Fred. I understand that Hazel is very much her own women but I also love her and Fred as a couple and am inclined to think they rather compliment and balance out each other's personalities. I would also suggest maybe giving Hazel a little empathy. Yes, she has problems of her own going on, but she is also a great friend who can put her self in someone else's shoes. Anyway that's just some mild suggestions of what I might like to see, but who am I kidding anything you write is pure gold to me. Write whatever you want.

Finally, this is something I am really annoyed with... GIVE HAZEL HER SHARES BACK! Felix is such a prat now and I find it hard to believe that Hazel won't find a way to get what is hers back. Then she'll give some to Leonard because she's awesome.
Oooooh maybe this could be what reunites her and Fred. A little project, no?
Sorry it's so long, and it frightens me how much more I want to say!
Your huge fan
Rebecca
8/9/2016 c29 2ClearAsDarkness
Good chapter! And that's so cool that you work for a Comunity Theater! And I know all about horse of animals, lol.
7/6/2016 c28 AliciaMae26
that guest reviewer can go fuck themselves
6/22/2016 c28 1AccountKillergogogo
Nooooo my heart but you were probably right about the whole relationship though. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
6/21/2016 c17 1TheQueen1615
Ahhh this chapter was so good
6/20/2016 c28 22DGMSilverAirHead03
Oh my god I'm so frustrated with both of them! Fred's a bloody idiot and oh man I KNEW the Yule Ball trick was gonna bite them in the ass! KNEW IT!

But as always excellent work and I can't wait for some more!
6/20/2016 c28 caelestii.e
gODDAMMIT WHY DO YOU HAVE TO WRITE SO WELL I CAN'T BE MAD AT YOU FOR THIS BULLSHIT YOU KEEP PUTTING US THROUGH ahem. sorry. anyway, brilliant writing as always, you're keeping it (frustratingly) realistic, so A on that. I love how you write Fred and George, and the complete and utter purity if George's and Hazel's bromance gives me a special kind of joy. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see where you take this!
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