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6/23/2020 c9 2Irina Hunter
It's Parvati Patil, not Parvarati. Also, "...Pansy Parkinson, a black haired girl with long black hair..." is redundant. Also, latter means either (1) situated or occurring nearer to the end of something than to the beginning, or (2) denoting the second or second mentioned of two people or things, so it should be "...'Martin Elllis Ambrose'." At first Merlin had considered using the former as his name.".
6/23/2020 c8 Irina Hunter
The Founders enchanted it to Sort the students after they (the Founders) died. How is Morgana susposed to be the Ambrose heiress if her current alias isn't an Ambrose? And it ahould be "...a wand braided into it...". Children from the magical communtiy in Ireland go to Hogwarts; Webster Boot and his brother Chadwick helped their adoptive parents found Ilvermorny School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, which is in the United Staes and takes students from all over North America.
6/23/2020 c7 Irina Hunter
It's the Rescriticed Section of the library, and the wolves in the forest, the HP Wiki says, "A wolf pack actually lives in the forest, the cubs of two werewolves that mated during full moon, however they were just beautiful and highly intelligent wolves. Despite this, rumours of savage werewolves living in the forest spread amongst the student body of Hogwarts, rumours that the staff let spread in hopes to help keep students out of the forest.".
6/23/2020 c6 Irina Hunter
September 2nd is when classes start at Hogwarts, the Sorting and Start-of-Term Feast happen on the 1st; The Hogwarts Express leaves King's Cross at 11:00 AM on Septembber 1st, and the students arrive at school the same day.
6/23/2020 c4 Irina Hunter
Gorlois died when Morgana was 10 years old, so she would have been six or seven years old when Vivienne died if Gorlois died three or four years later.
6/22/2020 c3 Irina Hunter
Hogwarts was founded around 993 A.D., so Helena would've been dead by 1646 (according to the HP Wiki, she died between 996 and 1000 A.D.). Also, Dumbledore is 110 years old at this point. And according to Ms. Rowling's timeline, SS/PS takes place during the 1991-1992 school year, which means that Merlin's alias would only be three years old if he was born in 1988.
6/15/2020 c12 2MerlinTheArchmage
Plz update
3/10/2020 c12 Guest
Upfront plz
1/29/2020 c12 1Guardian of the Inheritance
Good job keep it up
1/23/2020 c11 Guardian of the Inheritance
Good job keep it up !
11/12/2019 c12 Guest
I love !
10/13/2019 c1 Guest
I have only read the first chapter and i absolutely adore this already :)
10/9/2019 c11 Guest
Good story have you ever thought of pairing Harry with Arthur? hope you update
10/8/2019 c1 Guest
UPDATING AGAIN YESSSS!
10/8/2019 c1 1Darvalus
I absolutly love your story I hope you update really soon. I am very excited about the potions class with Morgana and merlin.
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