
8/22/2015 c7 Original artimies
Amazing new chapters! I absolutely love this story! And as for a song , how about " youth ?" I sadly don't know who's it by but I think you'll know it when you hear it.
Amazing new chapters! I absolutely love this story! And as for a song , how about " youth ?" I sadly don't know who's it by but I think you'll know it when you hear it.
8/18/2015 c6 Original artimies
* laughs* your writing skills are, as always the best. And as for a prediction, mabey the two groups( your OC group and the pines family) will meet up and defeat bill? Who knows you always think of cool ideas!
* laughs* your writing skills are, as always the best. And as for a prediction, mabey the two groups( your OC group and the pines family) will meet up and defeat bill? Who knows you always think of cool ideas!
8/18/2015 c6
3Wildtail of Wind
So. Seems like you've got an amazing story going there with notable characters and a great emotional value. xD What do you need help with, again? This is absolutely fabulous. Seriously. (Although I want to mention that "it's" and "its" are different. The first is "it is" and the second is for possession. :3 Just saying.) I like how you've made Ford start to feel for the creature. Wonderful job!

So. Seems like you've got an amazing story going there with notable characters and a great emotional value. xD What do you need help with, again? This is absolutely fabulous. Seriously. (Although I want to mention that "it's" and "its" are different. The first is "it is" and the second is for possession. :3 Just saying.) I like how you've made Ford start to feel for the creature. Wonderful job!
8/12/2015 c5 httpkirby
Wow... Poor Ford.
Is that some defensive mechanic the mermaid used? If it is, damn! I would be officially scared of Mermando. If it isn't, well... It's got me curious.
Wow... Poor Ford.
Is that some defensive mechanic the mermaid used? If it is, damn! I would be officially scared of Mermando. If it isn't, well... It's got me curious.
8/10/2015 c1 httpkirby
I had forgotten I was reading a Gravity Falls fanfic there. I was totally entranced by your story...
I had forgotten I was reading a Gravity Falls fanfic there. I was totally entranced by your story...
8/5/2015 c2 Original artimies
Thanks for the next chapter, your writing skills never seem to stop amazing me! Please keep on writing!
Thanks for the next chapter, your writing skills never seem to stop amazing me! Please keep on writing!