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6/7/2020 c20 Guest
This is very good, like VERY VERY GOOD, i think this is the best fanfiction i ever seen, Ive cried a lot because of your fanfic, plEASE MAKE MORE OF IT, PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY
9/18/2019 c11 11MadClawDragon
Grounded... heh... Nice
9/12/2019 c3 MadClawDragon
This reminds me of the show afterworld...
6/15/2019 c19 NBoss01
Read over this story and it was handled surprisingly well. The characters are inline with how they act in the show. The ideas of the diamond authority are pretty good considering how much you knew at the time of writing, interactions are decent but it improved as the story progressed. The only problem I really had was the main idea of the "evil steven" felt to cheezy and out there imo. Overall good story tho.
7/9/2018 c13 DiamondPupStah
GEMS
DONT
SLEEEEP XD
5/5/2017 c20 9Nickzilla20
I should have reviewed this story a little while ago since I've read it before, but because I now have the chance, I'll give you my full review. This was one of the most outstanding Steven universe fanfictions I've ever read. You didn't just added few tweaks, you retold the second season's story in your own unique way( which you are still doing right now). This story was fun, emotional and epic. I like that it shows how the gems really feel about Steven ( and we're still waiting for that to resolve in the actual show). And I love how Steven is training to become strong to protect his friends and family. I love that Lapis Lazuli joins the group since she's one of my favorite characters. And also you made your own fusions. Also the romantic subplot between Garnet and Luna was well made. But what I really love are the original characters. I'll be honest, at first I didn't think it would work. But Alex and Luna are actually well developed and likable. Alex is cool, tough and fun loving who acts as Steven's second older sister and gets along very well with Amythest. Luna is wise, gentle, brave and loving who does whatever she can to help and protect Steven. This isn't just my favorite Steven Universe fanfiction, it's one of my favorite fanfictions in general. I just wanted to share that with you since I always like to read this. Once again great job.
3/22/2017 c20 Guest
omg I love this story!
3/22/2017 c14 Guest
Love the interaction of Steven and lapis in this chapter and the next
3/21/2017 c15 Badrulz77
It's good but in this whole story you have to read all I wanted was a video of it all please make it
2/14/2017 c7 senor essay
very good i like it plz add senor essya in it and make him a cactus with arms and legs
2/14/2017 c3 theirish baca
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12/22/2016 c1 Pufflepie5
It's such a awesome story I read it like a million times!
8/15/2016 c20 3JapaneseMitsuye
This was amazing I loved it keep writing I love your writing style :3 :)
~Mitsuye
3/27/2016 c20 NBoss01
good story bro
but know your facts bro ( they do not need to eat or drink., they get their energy from their gems
3/26/2016 c11 NBoss01
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sob
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cri
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