for The Lightning King8/7/2016 c1 Wonderweed420
LMFAO! I stopped right after your GSOC said his name. I know exactly what you intend to do, shove your Garry Stu in our faces with how op he is. Stories that go this rout go nowhere.
LMFAO! I stopped right after your GSOC said his name. I know exactly what you intend to do, shove your Garry Stu in our faces with how op he is. Stories that go this rout go nowhere.
8/7/2016 c4 Guest
Whatever !, I can not believe your character Mitsuo is a stupid Gary stu. the only reason I read the whole chapter 1 was because I wanted to believe that there was a writer capable of creating a Gary stu with all its characteristics boring without it being a parody
Mitsuo has a hair color uncommon, is mysterious, is powerful, is "hot" is related to main characters and belongs to three clans although that is illogical and impossible, has the sharingan and byakugan addition to any other power out of the hat, what's next? What a tragic past!
How is it possible that in 2016 there are writers who write stories that revolve around aberrations called Mary Sue and Gary stu?
Whatever !, I can not believe your character Mitsuo is a stupid Gary stu. the only reason I read the whole chapter 1 was because I wanted to believe that there was a writer capable of creating a Gary stu with all its characteristics boring without it being a parody
Mitsuo has a hair color uncommon, is mysterious, is powerful, is "hot" is related to main characters and belongs to three clans although that is illogical and impossible, has the sharingan and byakugan addition to any other power out of the hat, what's next? What a tragic past!
How is it possible that in 2016 there are writers who write stories that revolve around aberrations called Mary Sue and Gary stu?