for To Each Their Own (or something like that, he said)11/6/2016 c2 Espeon35
I love how naruto and kurama get along as no one knew anything about their relations. Though I do hope this naruto is a person who learns fast then from the anime. I hope you publish the next chapter soon.
I love how naruto and kurama get along as no one knew anything about their relations. Though I do hope this naruto is a person who learns fast then from the anime. I hope you publish the next chapter soon.
5/27/2016 c2 
3Moonj2300
This is really good, not to mention interesting! When are you going to update it again? I hope you do it soon!
3Moonj2300This is really good, not to mention interesting! When are you going to update it again? I hope you do it soon!
8/30/2015 c2 WatsonManSAIYAN
Wonderful chapter, mate! I'm sorry it took me a while to notice the next update, but it was worth it! I'm itching to know what happens next, especially with the small snippet at the end. I'm curious as to see what the tone between Sasuke and Naruto would be.
Wonderful chapter, mate! I'm sorry it took me a while to notice the next update, but it was worth it! I'm itching to know what happens next, especially with the small snippet at the end. I'm curious as to see what the tone between Sasuke and Naruto would be.
8/20/2015 c2 Omegawatcher
I have come back to reading stories again, and the first in my inbox is yours.
This chapter I felt was a little jumbled, with different viewpoints in certain sections. You need to work on trying to "flow" the scene from one to another, since in some parts you manage to pull it off while in others it seems abrupt. But overall, this is pretty good, and Minato finally allowing his son to go to the Academy with that type of reveal is pretty sudden. Reading the small snippets of dialogue for the next chapter and knowing it will follow the anime, I am curious as to what spin you will introduce. Keep writing
-Omega
I have come back to reading stories again, and the first in my inbox is yours.
This chapter I felt was a little jumbled, with different viewpoints in certain sections. You need to work on trying to "flow" the scene from one to another, since in some parts you manage to pull it off while in others it seems abrupt. But overall, this is pretty good, and Minato finally allowing his son to go to the Academy with that type of reveal is pretty sudden. Reading the small snippets of dialogue for the next chapter and knowing it will follow the anime, I am curious as to what spin you will introduce. Keep writing
-Omega
8/10/2015 c1 Jleath1234
well great story anko x kakashi plus I think kakashi should be represented as naruto brother because when sakumo died minato raised kakashi so plz reply
well great story anko x kakashi plus I think kakashi should be represented as naruto brother because when sakumo died minato raised kakashi so plz reply
8/9/2015 c2 Guest
This is a good start! I think it's kinda cute how the Nine-Tails is Naruto's "imaginary friend." Makes me think of how Naruto might react when he finds out Kurama isn't imaginary. . . . Naruto: "You're real!?"
Kurama: "When did I ever tell you I wasn't?"
This is a good start! I think it's kinda cute how the Nine-Tails is Naruto's "imaginary friend." Makes me think of how Naruto might react when he finds out Kurama isn't imaginary. . . . Naruto: "You're real!?"
Kurama: "When did I ever tell you I wasn't?"
8/9/2015 c2 Guest
This chapter was great to read. You did a lot of research to make it presentable yet keep true to the original storyline. You have a way with using words to convey emotion, example being the flashback with Minato's wife Kushina dying. I will await for another chapter, though I am upset by the Notice on your other work.
This chapter was great to read. You did a lot of research to make it presentable yet keep true to the original storyline. You have a way with using words to convey emotion, example being the flashback with Minato's wife Kushina dying. I will await for another chapter, though I am upset by the Notice on your other work.
8/9/2015 c2 CW
Original and nicely written. Good job.
Original and nicely written. Good job.
8/7/2015 c1 Guest
This chapter was good. When are you putting up the next one?
This chapter was good. When are you putting up the next one?
8/5/2015 c1 Omegawatcher
I loved the way you used your words to describe the setting and conversation, though the story at the moment seems a little clique. But it does have potential, and I hope that, like your previous story, you don't disappoint.
-Omega
I loved the way you used your words to describe the setting and conversation, though the story at the moment seems a little clique. But it does have potential, and I hope that, like your previous story, you don't disappoint.
-Omega
8/5/2015 c1 WatsonManSAIYAN
What a nice little chapter, prologue none less, mate! I'm sad you didn't let me beta this piece of work...But it looks like you've gotten much better than what I remember! First time writing a Naruto story. Boy those were the days, when I used to be all over the show -I still am, but sometimes- and I love running across new stories to read in my spare time. Hurry with another chapter, I'm very curious as to what direction you will take this story.
What a nice little chapter, prologue none less, mate! I'm sad you didn't let me beta this piece of work...But it looks like you've gotten much better than what I remember! First time writing a Naruto story. Boy those were the days, when I used to be all over the show -I still am, but sometimes- and I love running across new stories to read in my spare time. Hurry with another chapter, I'm very curious as to what direction you will take this story.