for Royal9/4/2017 c1 Guest
This crossover's nothing but bad news.
This crossover's nothing but bad news.
4/28/2016 c1 Guest
I'd be really interested in more of this.
I'd be really interested in more of this.
8/6/2015 c1 
11MagicFireTiger
Oooh... this is really good so far. You're doing great with this. :) The tension between Hans and Eugene... just... so... WOW. The only thing I can say is towards the beginning of the chapter, in the fifth paragraph (if you count that beginning line "At the coronation of Queen Elsa of Arendelle" as a paragraph), you say "who's" when it should be "whose." I know, it can be confusing to tell the two apart. The way I remember it is "who's" is a contraption for "who is" and "whose" is... not, basically. :P But that's pretty much the only thing grammatically "crazy" about this! Anyway, I cannot wait for more, this story looks like it has great potential, I like it! :D
-MagicFireTiger
11MagicFireTigerOooh... this is really good so far. You're doing great with this. :) The tension between Hans and Eugene... just... so... WOW. The only thing I can say is towards the beginning of the chapter, in the fifth paragraph (if you count that beginning line "At the coronation of Queen Elsa of Arendelle" as a paragraph), you say "who's" when it should be "whose." I know, it can be confusing to tell the two apart. The way I remember it is "who's" is a contraption for "who is" and "whose" is... not, basically. :P But that's pretty much the only thing grammatically "crazy" about this! Anyway, I cannot wait for more, this story looks like it has great potential, I like it! :D
-MagicFireTiger