for Black Trigger6/5/2022 c35 memelee
alright one thing though, konami has tasteeee. okay but all things aside, WHAT A GREAT STORY! i enjoyed reading this all in one sitting and it kept me intrigued the whole time. as a major world trigger fan, this was extremely well written and seems realistic to the actual show. great job! ️
alright one thing though, konami has tasteeee. okay but all things aside, WHAT A GREAT STORY! i enjoyed reading this all in one sitting and it kept me intrigued the whole time. as a major world trigger fan, this was extremely well written and seems realistic to the actual show. great job! ️
2/5/2021 c3 
6katurdi
EEEYAHHH PROTECTIVE JIN IS THE BEST! There’s a pathetic amount of Yuma fanfics in this fandom, so finding this was like a blessing!
6katurdiEEEYAHHH PROTECTIVE JIN IS THE BEST! There’s a pathetic amount of Yuma fanfics in this fandom, so finding this was like a blessing!
4/11/2020 c29 Guest
in case this isnt just a review for chapter 29 i will say it this way: 29 i am not hating because I'm pretty sure they are that way too
in case this isnt just a review for chapter 29 i will say it this way: 29 i am not hating because I'm pretty sure they are that way too
5/6/2016 c35 4luna0starlight
I loved it! And since it ended on a happy note, I'm not all that sad about it. I'll just go and stuff my mind with fluffer-nutter stories. But this was absolutely beautiful and I'll treasure it forever. Thank you.
4luna0starlightI loved it! And since it ended on a happy note, I'm not all that sad about it. I'll just go and stuff my mind with fluffer-nutter stories. But this was absolutely beautiful and I'll treasure it forever. Thank you.
4/24/2016 c35 1KuroKapibara
The dreaded day has come, the day this awsome story ends... Why all good things must come to an end?! first the anime and now this fic, at least there is still the manga... or are you gonna take that too, life?! ok ok moving on.
And here I thought our albino shrimp was going to die, great thing we have four eyes, eh? Always finding a clever way to solve things (even if it meant using Chika, still It saved his life!).
And that ending... FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST! I adore that anime! and seeing those two together (even if it was just as a reference) was beautiful! The moment between Jin and Yuuma was lovely, like brothers separeted at birth. haha. and finally the Tamakoma gang are all together. I don't know why but when Yotaro said 'To dad, Raijinmaru!' did it for me and the unceremoniosly squeal was heard around the house.
Despite not being the original ending, it was adorable and great... but the others endings are interesting too, it would be nice to knowhow it would turn out to be. ... I can't believe I won't be reading this every tuesday! aww bumer... oh well. I had a great time reading this increadible story, thank you! and hopefuly we will read more of you soon in the future. See you later!
1KuroKapibaraThe dreaded day has come, the day this awsome story ends... Why all good things must come to an end?! first the anime and now this fic, at least there is still the manga... or are you gonna take that too, life?! ok ok moving on.
And here I thought our albino shrimp was going to die, great thing we have four eyes, eh? Always finding a clever way to solve things (even if it meant using Chika, still It saved his life!).
And that ending... FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST! I adore that anime! and seeing those two together (even if it was just as a reference) was beautiful! The moment between Jin and Yuuma was lovely, like brothers separeted at birth. haha. and finally the Tamakoma gang are all together. I don't know why but when Yotaro said 'To dad, Raijinmaru!' did it for me and the unceremoniosly squeal was heard around the house.
Despite not being the original ending, it was adorable and great... but the others endings are interesting too, it would be nice to knowhow it would turn out to be. ... I can't believe I won't be reading this every tuesday! aww bumer... oh well. I had a great time reading this increadible story, thank you! and hopefuly we will read more of you soon in the future. See you later!
4/22/2016 c35 Bloody Time
AHHH THIS IS AWESOME
YESSSS
Ok now that this is done what will I do with my life.
thank you for putting Yuma in pain and not killing him.
YOU'RE AN AMAZING AUTHOR!
Are you going to do another one-shot?
AHHH THIS IS AWESOME
YESSSS
Ok now that this is done what will I do with my life.
thank you for putting Yuma in pain and not killing him.
YOU'RE AN AMAZING AUTHOR!
Are you going to do another one-shot?
4/22/2016 c35 Guest
Yuma osumu friendship fic next that is great!
Yuma osumu friendship fic next that is great!
4/20/2016 c35 8EmbraceTheNerd
*claps* Who cares if the ending is corny?! Those are the best kinds! *sigh* It is very heartbreaking though that this has ended, it was so much fun to read and wait for...alas, I suppose all great things, or stories in this situation, must come to an end! *thumbs up w/ smile* Thanks for making these 35 chapters enjoyable, heartbreaking and over all beautiful!
I await your next work! Good luck!
8EmbraceTheNerd*claps* Who cares if the ending is corny?! Those are the best kinds! *sigh* It is very heartbreaking though that this has ended, it was so much fun to read and wait for...alas, I suppose all great things, or stories in this situation, must come to an end! *thumbs up w/ smile* Thanks for making these 35 chapters enjoyable, heartbreaking and over all beautiful!
I await your next work! Good luck!
4/20/2016 c8 Guest
shit
shit
4/20/2016 c7 Guest
oh my...
oh my...
4/16/2016 c34 4luna0starlight
Nooooooooo! It's ending! Noooooo! I'm going to cry in a corner if you don't make the ending so beautiful that even the blind can tell you it's so beautiful they would die if they saw it fully. With all love, hope, and kindness, bye~
4luna0starlightNooooooooo! It's ending! Noooooo! I'm going to cry in a corner if you don't make the ending so beautiful that even the blind can tell you it's so beautiful they would die if they saw it fully. With all love, hope, and kindness, bye~
4/15/2016 c34 Nekosan125
Loved the story! Hope you make other fanfics like that! (I don't know why, but I really like seeing Yuuma in dangerous situations, though there are not a lot of those... :/) Well, anyways, I'm really excited to see the epilogue!
Loved the story! Hope you make other fanfics like that! (I don't know why, but I really like seeing Yuuma in dangerous situations, though there are not a lot of those... :/) Well, anyways, I'm really excited to see the epilogue!
4/14/2016 c34 Guest
Awwwww sweet!
Awwwww sweet!