for PMD-Uprising Legends: Destiny Awaits Rewritten8/2/2021 c1 rylek196
This may come off weird as this is the PMD fandom but I just need to say my thoughts. You sure are a stubborn piece of shit, aren’t you? STILL keeping it up with the boilerplate reviews, I mean, even when it’s clear they don’t fucking work. At least *I* make an effort to differentiate my reviewvertisments from each other, AND I know they actually WORK, seeing as how my view count has seen a notable uptick since I started doing them.
*sigh* I don’t know what will get to you to quit, though, short of caving your head in with a heavy, blunt object. Even then, I’m worried whatever I used would just bounce off your thick skull. Ah, well. If blunt force trauma doesn’t work... you’re just not using enough, as the saying goes. ;) Now, where was I? Ah, yes...
Since I KNOW a lot of people are gonna be here from the Pokemon section, due to this asshole’s uh, ‘adventures’ there, to put it charitably, how about y’all curl up with a good story by yours truly? It’s called Long Way to Fall, my novelization of Pokemon White, the best dang adaptation of said game that there ever was!
It’s got everything you could want from a novelization or story in general: great characters that develop organically through their respective arcs, amazing action scenes (which have been a ton of fun for me to write, btw), great location descriptions, a healthy fleshing out of the lore and backstory of Unova, and many additional scenes that aren’t in the game to truly make it a cohesive story!
It’s tricky to keep track of all the plot threads at times, I admit, but there’s a special kind of satisfaction that comes with paying off something you set up five, six, or even ten or MORE chapters previously. So I hope you’ll join me on this incredible adventure I’m undertaking. Adapting Unova and bringing it to life is truly a pleasure and a privilege, and I feel honoured that I’m the one doing this. Meanwhile, all this filthy, disgusting bit of pond scum should feel is utter shame. Shame, for spamming so many innocent writer’s stories, many of whom were actually good, and shame for lacking even the slightest bit of awareness that he was doing more harm than good. At least I only target shit-fic writers and genuine rule-breakers- I.E. the guilty who actually DESERVE it. You, on the other hand, just toss out your boilerplate bullshit without rhyme or reason. So, to wrap up, fuck you, and rot in hell.
P.S. There are two stunningly obvious typos on your profile, and I’m simultaneously amazed and not that you didn’t catch them. You should be using ‘their’ in that sentence, you dolt, not ‘there’, as in, ‘over there’. Also, I’m *pretty sure* the slur for Germans in WW1 was ‘hun’, not ‘han’. How the fuck you screwed up a three-letter word is beyond me, and I’m DEFINITELY sure you missed *that* particular racism boat by about... oh, over a hundred years. :P I hope you realize how ludicrous and behind-the-times that line on your profile makes you look. Somehow, I doubt it...
This may come off weird as this is the PMD fandom but I just need to say my thoughts. You sure are a stubborn piece of shit, aren’t you? STILL keeping it up with the boilerplate reviews, I mean, even when it’s clear they don’t fucking work. At least *I* make an effort to differentiate my reviewvertisments from each other, AND I know they actually WORK, seeing as how my view count has seen a notable uptick since I started doing them.
*sigh* I don’t know what will get to you to quit, though, short of caving your head in with a heavy, blunt object. Even then, I’m worried whatever I used would just bounce off your thick skull. Ah, well. If blunt force trauma doesn’t work... you’re just not using enough, as the saying goes. ;) Now, where was I? Ah, yes...
Since I KNOW a lot of people are gonna be here from the Pokemon section, due to this asshole’s uh, ‘adventures’ there, to put it charitably, how about y’all curl up with a good story by yours truly? It’s called Long Way to Fall, my novelization of Pokemon White, the best dang adaptation of said game that there ever was!
It’s got everything you could want from a novelization or story in general: great characters that develop organically through their respective arcs, amazing action scenes (which have been a ton of fun for me to write, btw), great location descriptions, a healthy fleshing out of the lore and backstory of Unova, and many additional scenes that aren’t in the game to truly make it a cohesive story!
It’s tricky to keep track of all the plot threads at times, I admit, but there’s a special kind of satisfaction that comes with paying off something you set up five, six, or even ten or MORE chapters previously. So I hope you’ll join me on this incredible adventure I’m undertaking. Adapting Unova and bringing it to life is truly a pleasure and a privilege, and I feel honoured that I’m the one doing this. Meanwhile, all this filthy, disgusting bit of pond scum should feel is utter shame. Shame, for spamming so many innocent writer’s stories, many of whom were actually good, and shame for lacking even the slightest bit of awareness that he was doing more harm than good. At least I only target shit-fic writers and genuine rule-breakers- I.E. the guilty who actually DESERVE it. You, on the other hand, just toss out your boilerplate bullshit without rhyme or reason. So, to wrap up, fuck you, and rot in hell.
P.S. There are two stunningly obvious typos on your profile, and I’m simultaneously amazed and not that you didn’t catch them. You should be using ‘their’ in that sentence, you dolt, not ‘there’, as in, ‘over there’. Also, I’m *pretty sure* the slur for Germans in WW1 was ‘hun’, not ‘han’. How the fuck you screwed up a three-letter word is beyond me, and I’m DEFINITELY sure you missed *that* particular racism boat by about... oh, over a hundred years. :P I hope you realize how ludicrous and behind-the-times that line on your profile makes you look. Somehow, I doubt it...
2/6/2021 c1 Guest
Story is dead. Move on folks.
Story is dead. Move on folks.
8/27/2017 c1 Fan type person
OMG THIS STORY IS BACK :D
The original version of this story was one of the fist fanfics that I ever read and was actually one of the things that made me continue to read pmd fanfics on this site. I know that you haven't updated in a year and writing is really hard but u really hope that you do continue this story because it is one of my favourite stories of all time.
PS: I feel like you wrote the personality of the two Alex's a lot better in this version of the story compared to the old one, I'm a bit sad that I can't find the old version of this story but I am also really happy because I can see that you have made a lot of things much better in the remake
OMG THIS STORY IS BACK :D
The original version of this story was one of the fist fanfics that I ever read and was actually one of the things that made me continue to read pmd fanfics on this site. I know that you haven't updated in a year and writing is really hard but u really hope that you do continue this story because it is one of my favourite stories of all time.
PS: I feel like you wrote the personality of the two Alex's a lot better in this version of the story compared to the old one, I'm a bit sad that I can't find the old version of this story but I am also really happy because I can see that you have made a lot of things much better in the remake
4/8/2017 c14 Ren
"Destiny Awaits" huh... but for how long are we gonna wait for the next one? It's been almost a year. Oh well...
"Destiny Awaits" huh... but for how long are we gonna wait for the next one? It's been almost a year. Oh well...
9/24/2016 c2 Guest
Can I plz suggest a character plz
Can I plz suggest a character plz
5/23/2016 c14 
3A Big Spooky Ck
Hey, good job with this chapter! :3 10/10! XD even though it's short, it's pretty good. XD great job! Welp I'm out, Byez!
3A Big Spooky CkHey, good job with this chapter! :3 10/10! XD even though it's short, it's pretty good. XD great job! Welp I'm out, Byez!
5/23/2016 c14 WSXQAZ
Wow, quite a few surprising things here. I honestly didn't think that about the Dragonite, who would've guessed?
This just adds more to the mystery behind this group. For them wanting to challenge the Legedbaries, they must have something big planned. I look forward to seeing what it is.
Wow, quite a few surprising things here. I honestly didn't think that about the Dragonite, who would've guessed?
This just adds more to the mystery behind this group. For them wanting to challenge the Legedbaries, they must have something big planned. I look forward to seeing what it is.
5/12/2016 c13 WSXQAZ
Now that was a fantastic ending to a battle, still surprise that any of them made it out alive. Then again it would be too early to kill of any character.
I think maybe doing a bit of both might help. As in, go back to the guild, but maybe have the guild leader speak some things concerning the feral Dragonite.
Anyways, great chapter and great fight scene.
Now that was a fantastic ending to a battle, still surprise that any of them made it out alive. Then again it would be too early to kill of any character.
I think maybe doing a bit of both might help. As in, go back to the guild, but maybe have the guild leader speak some things concerning the feral Dragonite.
Anyways, great chapter and great fight scene.
5/11/2016 c13 A Big Spooky Ck
Yo! What an intense end to this little arc! Our heroes are barely able to defeat dragonite thanks to efforts of literally everyone! Great job! :D 10/10! Welp I'm out, Byez!
Yo! What an intense end to this little arc! Our heroes are barely able to defeat dragonite thanks to efforts of literally everyone! Great job! :D 10/10! Welp I'm out, Byez!
3/27/2016 c12 1Dust the Absol
Sorry for the late review, but after reading about that feral dragonite, I couldn't but perform some experiments. I knew that pseudo legendary pokemon had many capabilities, buy that dragonite was something else. But kiddos for Alex and Hip for lasting this long. Glad to know that Krystel showed up just in time. Very interested to see how this battle will end.
1Dust the AbsolSorry for the late review, but after reading about that feral dragonite, I couldn't but perform some experiments. I knew that pseudo legendary pokemon had many capabilities, buy that dragonite was something else. But kiddos for Alex and Hip for lasting this long. Glad to know that Krystel showed up just in time. Very interested to see how this battle will end.
3/18/2016 c12 Davus77
Finally a new chapter! *cheers* I've been waiting for this and expected the fight to be over, but apparently I'm wrong :v
About the fight though, it was very good. I could say that you make the fight kinda slow, but the way you described every scene in detail makes up for it imo, so its all good XD
Anyway, I guess I'll just wait patiently for the next chapter, and if the fight isn't over by the next chapter, I wouldn't be surprised if this story will end in chapter 200ish XD
Finally a new chapter! *cheers* I've been waiting for this and expected the fight to be over, but apparently I'm wrong :v
About the fight though, it was very good. I could say that you make the fight kinda slow, but the way you described every scene in detail makes up for it imo, so its all good XD
Anyway, I guess I'll just wait patiently for the next chapter, and if the fight isn't over by the next chapter, I wouldn't be surprised if this story will end in chapter 200ish XD
3/18/2016 c12 3A Big Spooky Ck
AWESOME FIGHT CHAPTER! Ahem, Sorry..But great job! 11/10! It's intense, epic,and satisfying all the way through...Awesome. ;3 Welp, I can't wait for the next chapter! Welp I'm out, Byez!
3A Big Spooky CkAWESOME FIGHT CHAPTER! Ahem, Sorry..But great job! 11/10! It's intense, epic,and satisfying all the way through...Awesome. ;3 Welp, I can't wait for the next chapter! Welp I'm out, Byez!
3/17/2016 c12 1ProtonMudkip
I'd say you did pretty well. Keep in mind that I look for spelling and grammar mistakes mostly. I noticed none this time.
1ProtonMudkipI'd say you did pretty well. Keep in mind that I look for spelling and grammar mistakes mostly. I noticed none this time.
3/17/2016 c12 23murloc rampage
It was okay. I can't remember the original fight so I can't compare the differences but that's okay. Fighting in fanfics are a lot different than watching them. Even the best writers can have difficulty writing a fight scene while keeping everyone's attention. This did rather well to keep my attention. I'll go back to writing like I always do and await the next chapter.
23murloc rampageIt was okay. I can't remember the original fight so I can't compare the differences but that's okay. Fighting in fanfics are a lot different than watching them. Even the best writers can have difficulty writing a fight scene while keeping everyone's attention. This did rather well to keep my attention. I'll go back to writing like I always do and await the next chapter.