for Dreamer14h c1 Guest
I'm at a loss for words. This is a goated fanfic. Up there with some of the all time greats like DTESH, Morality Chain, and Walk on the Moon. I cannot get over just how *real* Jade feels. She isn't a shitty self insert or a generic wish fulfillment protagonist. She's a genuinely human character with her own set of flaws and ideals.
There were some minor grammatical hiccups, and your sentence structure could have been better at times, but neither of those flaws change the fact that this story is amazing. I've always believed that when done well, an OC centric fanfic is the best type of fanfic. They can demonstrate how the inclusion of an unknown quantity can completely flip canon on its head and force characters into situations they would otherwise never experience. Unfortunately, only a miniscule portion of those stories are actually written well. Luckily for me, this is one of those rare few gems.
Kudos to you, author!
I'm at a loss for words. This is a goated fanfic. Up there with some of the all time greats like DTESH, Morality Chain, and Walk on the Moon. I cannot get over just how *real* Jade feels. She isn't a shitty self insert or a generic wish fulfillment protagonist. She's a genuinely human character with her own set of flaws and ideals.
There were some minor grammatical hiccups, and your sentence structure could have been better at times, but neither of those flaws change the fact that this story is amazing. I've always believed that when done well, an OC centric fanfic is the best type of fanfic. They can demonstrate how the inclusion of an unknown quantity can completely flip canon on its head and force characters into situations they would otherwise never experience. Unfortunately, only a miniscule portion of those stories are actually written well. Luckily for me, this is one of those rare few gems.
Kudos to you, author!
20h c27 Guest
OMG THE REVEAL!
You could not have handled that better
OMG THE REVEAL!
You could not have handled that better
5/5 c29 Guest
I really hope you update this soon!
I really hope you update this soon!
5/4 c29 EmiliaKyuchi
Thank you for sharing this story. I love Jade. She feels real and genuine (even when she’s being sneaky). I like that she is capable but still has flaws. You have done an excellent job shaping her character and I’m so invested. I’m rooting for her even if things seem like they’re heading to a bittersweet end. All the ripple effects big and small have made for an even more exciting experience. The world building is interesting and I love seeing the different dynamics between everyone, oc and canon characters alike. Thank you.
Thank you for sharing this story. I love Jade. She feels real and genuine (even when she’s being sneaky). I like that she is capable but still has flaws. You have done an excellent job shaping her character and I’m so invested. I’m rooting for her even if things seem like they’re heading to a bittersweet end. All the ripple effects big and small have made for an even more exciting experience. The world building is interesting and I love seeing the different dynamics between everyone, oc and canon characters alike. Thank you.
5/4 c25 EmiliaKyuchi
Percy’s crush is adorable, not gonna lie. Probably not going to end well given the circumstances but still. Given Jade’s mental age and purposefully keeping distance though she is nowhere near reciprocating. All the character dynamics are super interesting to see.
Percy’s crush is adorable, not gonna lie. Probably not going to end well given the circumstances but still. Given Jade’s mental age and purposefully keeping distance though she is nowhere near reciprocating. All the character dynamics are super interesting to see.