for The Galaxy's Greatest Warriors5/20 c8 
4Undeadhero143
You try to stuff as much as you can into this fic
While the concept is, well, interesting and to be honest, really great, I love it
The execution is not
4Undeadhero143You try to stuff as much as you can into this fic
While the concept is, well, interesting and to be honest, really great, I love it
The execution is not
2/21/2019 c1 HanadaMB
your first chapters are very similar to another story
called roots reaching into space and considering it was published first might want to check it out
your first chapters are very similar to another story
called roots reaching into space and considering it was published first might want to check it out
2/14/2017 c3 mistercool96
Can I just say that I am enjoying the story, only 3 chapters in and I see you have a talent for this. The use of an OC race to introduce Thedas to aliens was a good choice in my mind. Excitedly I'm gonna go ahead and binge to the last chapter.
Can I just say that I am enjoying the story, only 3 chapters in and I see you have a talent for this. The use of an OC race to introduce Thedas to aliens was a good choice in my mind. Excitedly I'm gonna go ahead and binge to the last chapter.
1/24/2017 c4 trninjakiller
This just got way out of hand way to fucking quickly. This should be in the xovers section.
This just got way out of hand way to fucking quickly. This should be in the xovers section.
12/25/2016 c4 A friend
I enjoy your inclusion of other universes
I enjoy your inclusion of other universes
8/27/2016 c4 Avo385
The thing with this story is that you are doing too much, and trying too hard. It, in my opinion, didn't work out too well. At first I had high hopes, now it's just, as I said before, too much.
The thing with this story is that you are doing too much, and trying too hard. It, in my opinion, didn't work out too well. At first I had high hopes, now it's just, as I said before, too much.
7/18/2016 c9 Guest
i really like your story, but why put tobuscus in the stasis pod, I thought i would be Doomguy/Doomslayer from Doom. but it is what it is, its your story anyway. Great story
i really like your story, but why put tobuscus in the stasis pod, I thought i would be Doomguy/Doomslayer from Doom. but it is what it is, its your story anyway. Great story
6/10/2016 c8 Akshka
Wonderfully done update more plz this is very good
Wonderfully done update more plz this is very good
5/15/2016 c4 Guest
Too many errors and logical fallacies to name...in pretty much every second sentence of these endless timelines.
I'll give you one that makes your story stand out even amongst the truly bad stories on this site: Ships benefit from magical shields because so they can counter "much more air resistance"...in space (this particularly tasty bit of cluelessness is somewhere in chapter 2). Aside from that, your grammar is so atrocious I wouldn't continue reading this even without its other flaws.
Your story is close to the realms of "My Immortal" in terms of quality, quite a feat...
Too many errors and logical fallacies to name...in pretty much every second sentence of these endless timelines.
I'll give you one that makes your story stand out even amongst the truly bad stories on this site: Ships benefit from magical shields because so they can counter "much more air resistance"...in space (this particularly tasty bit of cluelessness is somewhere in chapter 2). Aside from that, your grammar is so atrocious I wouldn't continue reading this even without its other flaws.
Your story is close to the realms of "My Immortal" in terms of quality, quite a feat...
5/15/2016 c7 Sceonn
How the hell can Sparatus reinstate Shepard as Specter when the Hierarchy left the Council for the Empire?
How the hell can Sparatus reinstate Shepard as Specter when the Hierarchy left the Council for the Empire?
5/15/2016 c7 WindBear47
Ok, this is an awesome chapter.
A team effort being used to piss off all the ME characters that I hate. Most of all, I love the trolling. Hooray! For overkill!
One request though, next chapter could you have Shepard and Anderson chat or discuss all the changes?
Ok, this is an awesome chapter.
A team effort being used to piss off all the ME characters that I hate. Most of all, I love the trolling. Hooray! For overkill!
One request though, next chapter could you have Shepard and Anderson chat or discuss all the changes?