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7/7/2019 c16 A.T.W
This was an amazing story; I hope you live the life you aimed for. Never give up on what you believe in.
1/12/2019 c16 5anaticulapraecantrix
What a wonderful ending. Great job on hanging on to this story and seeing it through.
1/4/2019 c16 knightphoenix2
Well, I'm glad that we got a happy ending after all! And, I'm very glad that it turned out that Elena Williams wasn't dead after all, but still amongst the living, and still on the side of the angels.

Still, there's no way Elena could have draggeed out Ethan, Fitzpatrick, and at least two of the surviving goons alone. She had to have had help, a lot of it, just to keep Ethan alive with minimum medical support, and to hold Fitzpatrick prisoner - all while trying to locate and rescue her husband.

Rather fortuitous that Elena was able to beat Fitzpatrick to his murder site and turn the tables on him, and presumably on whoever else was with him, since the cops only found two bodies.

Or, was this not the first time that the Syndicate has done this sort of thing?

And, "immobilize" Fitzpatrick? Generally speaking, when you drop a building on someone, you're not trying to capture them - you're taking them out. I'm just glad that she was able to rescue Ethan, and presumably make Fitzpatrick's life a living hell from here on out.

And once Elena had completed her mission, why didn't the IMF *immediately* take Ethan to the hospital? Or, show up on Brandt's doorstep right after Ethan has returned to his friends?

I'm hoping for a sequel, where hopefully, Fitzpatrick will be tried and punished for his crimes! And Ethan gets the medical help that he desperately needs ...

Thanks for finishing the story; it was great!
1/1/2019 c16 2Fallout47
And he's finally home. :)

Thank you for this. Very entertaining read.
1/1/2019 c16 perplexion08
Marvelous...
Can't believe it's over...
Plz plz plz write more like this one...
12/31/2018 c17 ThatOneDino
Man the day I start reading this, it gets finished. Great story, absolutely loved it.
12/30/2018 c14 perplexion08
Ooh... And.. I wanna say that Everything seems so professional to me that I really really wanna see this on big screen.. with all those Tom Cruise's famous stunts... It would be worth watching...
And also Sorry If I've offended you with any of my words... I'm new to Fanfiction and don't Know much about stuff...
12/30/2018 c15 perplexion08
Amazing...(loads of applause)
This is hands down the best MI fanfiction I've ever read... Every single thing hits the right chords perfectly...(in my opinion... Obviously)...The characters, their emotions, thoughts, the fights... All of them just awesome... Even made me cry at several points...
I really really want you to complete this ASAP...
Desperately waiting for the next update dear...(Don't keep me waiting for long...)
And also... Hope you'll continue writing more even after this...
PS... I read all the chapters in one day... Wasn't able to stop even for a moment...
12/29/2018 c15 Fallout47
Syndicate getting mixed in all this. Intriguing.

And don't worry about the formatting issue. Sometimes things happen.
12/29/2018 c15 45rayrae118
I hope you manage to fix the formatting of this chapter soon so that I can actually read it.
12/28/2018 c15 knightphoenix2
I'm afraid I had considerable difficulties reading the chapter, apparently due to a formatting, or maybe a HTML issue.

But, it looks like the Syndicate, and especially Solomon Lane, are really earning some serious *divine* retribution ...

Which may have already started ...

Please correct the issue and keep up the great work!
12/28/2018 c15 Guest
I'm afraid the chapter is rather unreadable.
10/23/2018 c14 2Fallout47
Definitely will wait for the continuation of the story.

Best of luck with schoolwork! I know how much of a pain it can be.
10/22/2018 c14 knightphoenix2
Ok! I can wait a bit longer for the final three chapters, since your education, and Real Life, must come first.

However, given that horrific cliffhanger at the end of Chapter 13, I hope to be reading the story's continuation for Christmas!

Because, I want to see the monsters who have caused so much anguish and agony, in an effort to murder an innocent man, not for what he might have done to them. but as a symbol of surviving the horrors that, apparently, one of them didn't ...
... be brought to *justice*.
10/19/2018 c13 Guest
Oh dang, what a cliffhanger. I’m so excited to read what comes next! Please update soon, and have a nice day!
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