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Nzme
Nzme
8/8/2019 c1 Guest
Plz continue this story
Plz continue this story
10/25/2015 c1 Guest
awesome
awesome
8/31/2015 c1 
1NopeNotTelling
Very, very well written! The way you describe your characters and the rhythm of your sentences… bravo! It puts all the emphasis right where it should be. Keep up the awesome writing! :D
1NopeNotTellingVery, very well written! The way you describe your characters and the rhythm of your sentences… bravo! It puts all the emphasis right where it should be. Keep up the awesome writing! :D