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9/15/2015 c4 8sallycoombs
write more, I love it!
8/25/2015 c3 1riikuu
Okay, so first off; this is the first OC story I have ever actually enjoyed. Maria is an interesting and funny character and her sister is just too adorable! .
However, only one thing is bothering me a little. You seem to be using two point of views, third person and first person, is that intentional or a mistake? It's slightly taking away from the story, but I can move passed it .
Other than that I like it so far, just make sure you don't rush this promising plot :)
- SiNii
8/15/2015 c4 puppies659
Yaz
8/15/2015 c4 LadyStoic
I thought it was short and sweet! More insight into our main character.
8/13/2015 c3 LadyStoic
This was a really cute chapter :)
Tense got mixed up again. It makes it a tad bit confusing but I understand what you're trying to portray. Let me know if you want any help editing!
8/13/2015 c2 LadyStoic
It flip flopped tenses a few times from 1st person to 3rd but other than that I really enjoyed this chapter! Good to get a little background on your OC and little sister. Please post soon!
8/13/2015 c1 LadyStoic
Your writing style is very enjoyable and feels real. I like it very much so far!

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