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3/2/2016 c10 ZGK1007
Awesome chapter! Unfortunately I have no ideas for the next. I suck at writing. But I believe you can do it. Can't wait for the next one!
2/27/2016 c10 fictionelement777
Have him train naruto and spare tayuya. She's an uzumaki to.
2/25/2016 c1 fictionelement777
Plz give us more! This story is awesome!
1/24/2016 c9 ZGK1007
I think a battle royal would be cool. Can't wait for the next chapter!
12/14/2015 c7 2CoffeeTime987
This was a great chapter, can't wait to see how it affects the timeline!
12/14/2015 c7 wahyubison
i can't wait interactions between naruto and haruki
i hates kakashi because he is shitty teacher who doesn't give benefit of kage busnshin
12/13/2015 c7 fictionelement777
AWESOME CHAPTER!
11/1/2015 c6 CoffeeTime987
Slightly disappointed there was no lemon haha but I still love the fight scene's and your attention to detail with the storyline to Naruto
10/31/2015 c6 fictionelement777
AWESOME! When's the next chapter coming?
9/27/2015 c2 4dkdc
Not really a fan of self incest but i must admit this story is good, nice plot and minor mistakes though i wish the chapters were a bit longer
9/18/2015 c5 Guest
keep the work up good read i want more
9/4/2015 c4 2CoffeeTime987
A time skip would be nice from time to time just to move along the story. A summary would be helpful too when doing a time skip, if it's a massive one if it's just a few weeks I don't think it's very necessary.
9/2/2015 c4 3zeldawolffang
a time skip would be nice
8/26/2015 c3 2CoffeeTime987
When you have whats going on in the background in brackets, it helps with the story.
I also enjoy your style of writing, it makes me want to root for the guy.
8/21/2015 c2 CoffeeTime987
I'm enjoying the story so far, can't wait to read about his challenges! :D
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