for I should never have left you10/14/2015 c1 Guest
In the show I feel like kush doesn't actually want jade and it's been hinted that he's the father of Stacey's baby I find it unrealistic that he actually wants jade here .
In the show I feel like kush doesn't actually want jade and it's been hinted that he's the father of Stacey's baby I find it unrealistic that he actually wants jade here .
10/14/2015 c1 Guest
I really like the story but in the show Shirley and dean generally care about the wellbeing of jade, I wish you showed this more.
I really like the story but in the show Shirley and dean generally care about the wellbeing of jade, I wish you showed this more.
9/30/2015 c7 
6lilangel1
Really enjoyed this chapter. glad Derek let shabnam see jade please update soon
6lilangel1Really enjoyed this chapter. glad Derek let shabnam see jade please update soon
9/4/2015 c1 Guest
Can you please include some dean maybe him reuniting with his daughter.
Can you please include some dean maybe him reuniting with his daughter.
9/4/2015 c4 Cookie
So great! I love reading it and its so nice to see shabs with jade
So great! I love reading it and its so nice to see shabs with jade
9/3/2015 c4 Guest
loooove this! really nice chapter and im looking forward to the next one becca x
loooove this! really nice chapter and im looking forward to the next one becca x
8/30/2015 c3 emma
Excellent. Have more of the masoods and romance with Kush, Carmel perhaps as overprotectivity
Excellent. Have more of the masoods and romance with Kush, Carmel perhaps as overprotectivity
8/30/2015 c3 Cookie
I love it! It's so good and its great to read please update:)
I love it! It's so good and its great to read please update:)
8/24/2015 c2 Guest
Absolutely loved this chapter! I cant wait for the next one! It would be nice to have some more Kush and Shabnam scenes in the next chapter because im obsessed with them ;) Becca x
Absolutely loved this chapter! I cant wait for the next one! It would be nice to have some more Kush and Shabnam scenes in the next chapter because im obsessed with them ;) Becca x
8/19/2015 c1 Guest
omgomg please carry this on! im a little bit obsessed with kush and shabnam and this is the first fanfic ive seen about them. this is really good!
omgomg please carry this on! im a little bit obsessed with kush and shabnam and this is the first fanfic ive seen about them. this is really good!