for The Black Strings4/24/2021 c1 nunes
Super criativo e divertido, muito bem!
Super criativo e divertido, muito bem!
11/14/2020 c14 
2Charbuff
I know you haven’t updated in a long while, but I just started reading this story and I think the plot is really fun
2CharbuffI know you haven’t updated in a long while, but I just started reading this story and I think the plot is really fun
6/30/2020 c14 rubyred753
Ha-ha, such a funny ending to the chapter! There are so many possibilities aheadrappochment between James and Regulus, between James and Hermione, between James and Harry. etc. Will the ministry give Hermione grief for their emergence from the Veil (breaking in)? Where did James go?
Ha-ha, such a funny ending to the chapter! There are so many possibilities aheadrappochment between James and Regulus, between James and Hermione, between James and Harry. etc. Will the ministry give Hermione grief for their emergence from the Veil (breaking in)? Where did James go?
6/22/2020 c14 jfairlee
More please! I want to know how awesome it'll be when James makes it right with everyone!
More please! I want to know how awesome it'll be when James makes it right with everyone!
10/11/2019 c14 NHPhoenix24
Wow! I’m going to reread soon. You really did a great job taking this to unusual places. So ethereal to start . I was just thinking of all the new relationships going on here. If Harry has a child, it would have 5 living step/grandparents, three of which are also his aunt and uncle. Very weird but the non aging in the veil helps the whole thing seen more plausible. There are so many places you can go with this. Don’t get bogged down in picky negative reviews. It boggles my mind to think that people can be so ungrateful for an authors efforts. I say If you don’t have constructive criticism, pass on making a comment. If it’s an issue have someone else read comments to you and then and only point out the best to you. I hope you continue this gem of a fiction, you could polish this right up to top, a complete puts you into the World Cup. Much gratitude!
Wow! I’m going to reread soon. You really did a great job taking this to unusual places. So ethereal to start . I was just thinking of all the new relationships going on here. If Harry has a child, it would have 5 living step/grandparents, three of which are also his aunt and uncle. Very weird but the non aging in the veil helps the whole thing seen more plausible. There are so many places you can go with this. Don’t get bogged down in picky negative reviews. It boggles my mind to think that people can be so ungrateful for an authors efforts. I say If you don’t have constructive criticism, pass on making a comment. If it’s an issue have someone else read comments to you and then and only point out the best to you. I hope you continue this gem of a fiction, you could polish this right up to top, a complete puts you into the World Cup. Much gratitude!
9/15/2019 c14 Guest
Damn. I always fall in love with the unfinished fics. Interesting story even if it's a pretty different pairing
Damn. I always fall in love with the unfinished fics. Interesting story even if it's a pretty different pairing