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8/9/2016 c27 Chrome
I usually dont comment, but I hope you continue going strong. I really enjoy reading this story, hope you get an editor or something though.
8/9/2016 c27 internet random
why is this story M?
8/8/2016 c1 Guest
It's good that this is one of the really, really, really, really rare "authentic" harem fics on this site, but...
It's cringey as hell. One of the most cringey Oregairu fanfics ever, I'd say. It's truly painful, physically painful really, to read this. Such a pity.
8/7/2016 c1 Guest
This is
8/7/2016 c27 3IceHole
A Beta Reader can solve all of your problems, my friend~
7/7/2016 c1 ccelarator
For me personally this story is a bit too much wish fulfilment and kinda cringy to be perfectly honest.

But you did introduce me to some great songs , so props to you for that.

#nomorecompacenthachiman
7/7/2016 c25 3Sorashita Charyubi
Yukino. What do you mean by 'don't go'?

P.S. I should have follow this story for a long time ago.
6/3/2016 c23 3IceHole
I can't believe you are still writing this. Gotta give props to ya for that. Normally authors would stop writing after taking criticisms like that. Well... i just wanted to say that you're great. Thank you for everything!
4/24/2016 c1 YuukiAsuna-Chan
This is crap, 8man is OOC. Hell, its not the 8man at all.
4/10/2016 c1 1Shioran Toushin
man, frankly i don't like your story too much, and honestly and i'm going to use caps here because it's really really important IT'S NOT BECAUSE OF YOUR PLOT which i grew to like, it's funny, your characters are OOC, but it works for them with certain exceptions where the text makes them way too "D/dry/wooden" but my real beef with the fic is some typos and grammar errors that detract from the story and prevents me from having that immersion into the lives of the characters, especially around the first chapters, so you may want to revise them somewhere along the line so people can enjoy it better.
4/5/2016 c18 9The King of Plot Bunnies
Every time you call her "Mura", a part of my soul dies.
4/4/2016 c8 Guest
What dafuq it jumped from chapter 3 to chapter 18... i dont even saw it!?
2/6/2016 c8 1Lolsebca
I was hoping the end to be worth, but I think something is wrong in this fanfiction : too fast, bad grammar (then instead of than), no periods after some sentences, random capital letters...
I still appreciated this fanfiction because none else ever went deep into the harem concept in Oregairu but please try to make some efforts next time...
2/4/2016 c1 DeadlyxDevil
I really want to sign in, it's just that it's a bother. So... I like the story. I want to see more. I want to read more. Haha alright, well this was pretty dam creative. I was very entertained and love it. A word of advice would be better story organization. Since it gets confusing about what's happening without infering what's happened already. I mean the first chapter was like wow, but some things didn't need to be said and the were part where information was missing. Or even subtle hints about what was happening without us actually guessing what happened
10/13/2015 c5 Zero Gawain
interesting.
Continuous soon, please
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