for Phoning it in1/10 c11 TrumpasaurusRex
I hate fics that bring Dawn into the timeline early.
Dawn was only added to memories. She never existed prior to season 5. It makes no sense.
I hate fics that bring Dawn into the timeline early.
Dawn was only added to memories. She never existed prior to season 5. It makes no sense.
1/10 c5 TrumpasaurusRex
1) I don’t like the MC passing out powers like candy
2) I don’t like the MC allowing people to morph as his body.
3) Jimmy laughed. "Or-or I could t-touch the cube again an-and start wi-with a n-new base f-form."
Everyone fell silent for a moment.
"Is it really that simple?" Wendy asks.
"Man, that is a huge plot hole," I said while holding out the box to Jimmy.
That’s not how the morphing cube works. Once you become a nothlit (stuck in a morph), you’re stuck permanently. Touching the cube again does not allow you to reacquire morphing ability. Each person can only touch the cube once.
1) I don’t like the MC passing out powers like candy
2) I don’t like the MC allowing people to morph as his body.
3) Jimmy laughed. "Or-or I could t-touch the cube again an-and start wi-with a n-new base f-form."
Everyone fell silent for a moment.
"Is it really that simple?" Wendy asks.
"Man, that is a huge plot hole," I said while holding out the box to Jimmy.
That’s not how the morphing cube works. Once you become a nothlit (stuck in a morph), you’re stuck permanently. Touching the cube again does not allow you to reacquire morphing ability. Each person can only touch the cube once.
1/4 c1 carrotcakeisreallygood
Bro sees alien like dog and immediately follows, yet is too paranoid to drink the super potions . Bro is a diffrent kind of weird. lol
Bro sees alien like dog and immediately follows, yet is too paranoid to drink the super potions . Bro is a diffrent kind of weird. lol
9/18/2024 c26 Ryan
God I want to see more of this! I want more of everyone of your stories! Their all so good!
God I want to see more of this! I want more of everyone of your stories! Their all so good!
9/5/2024 c1 Invictus602
So he knows hes an si and knows of the dangers coming and knows about the powers he has. Yet he doesn’t immediately drink his powers? Lets them roll around his jacket just asking for someone(cough contessa) to steal them or drop out and roll away. This is just borderline negligent in the storyline.
So he knows hes an si and knows of the dangers coming and knows about the powers he has. Yet he doesn’t immediately drink his powers? Lets them roll around his jacket just asking for someone(cough contessa) to steal them or drop out and roll away. This is just borderline negligent in the storyline.
5/19/2024 c26 
1EliteShadow
love this story so far keep up the great work i look forward to reading more of this and hopefully more of all your other storys as well please keep up the great work!
1EliteShadowlove this story so far keep up the great work i look forward to reading more of this and hopefully more of all your other storys as well please keep up the great work!
4/22/2024 c25 Crywolf178
I’m embarrassed to admit I only just figured out “Leo” is likely short for Leopard as in butters…
I really should have realized that sooner but I just figured it was a leader during the terminator movies given I never got around to watching those.
I’m embarrassed to admit I only just figured out “Leo” is likely short for Leopard as in butters…
I really should have realized that sooner but I just figured it was a leader during the terminator movies given I never got around to watching those.
3/24/2024 c26 spriensmajean01
I was just re-reading this and realized that if the hell mouth hadn’t been messing with his head he could have practiced density shifting to get in and out of the Summers house. Poor guy needs more practice with his personal skills before facing Levi. Hopefully he makes it to The Potterverse and can practice on some deserving people there.
I was just re-reading this and realized that if the hell mouth hadn’t been messing with his head he could have practiced density shifting to get in and out of the Summers house. Poor guy needs more practice with his personal skills before facing Levi. Hopefully he makes it to The Potterverse and can practice on some deserving people there.
2/15/2024 c1 Goldenexperience420
yeah...no. I feel like this should have just been in the Xovers category only. The only worm part so far is less than a chapter and if someone is looking for a worm fic or the worm part of this fic when it eventually comes,they would either be forced to read like fifty different worlds or not understand anything if they skip to it.
yeah...no. I feel like this should have just been in the Xovers category only. The only worm part so far is less than a chapter and if someone is looking for a worm fic or the worm part of this fic when it eventually comes,they would either be forced to read like fifty different worlds or not understand anything if they skip to it.