for The Reveal of Alex Rider4/19 c1 ThatDamKotlcCybo
Love this!
Love this!
3/22/2017 c1 
10Ava Simbelmyne
YAY! that's really exciting that hes going to be adopted! (in this fic) Really good! I like the idea as well...with how he was being broadcasted and all... I bet you could turn this into a multi chapter if you put in more detail and background/in between stuff. Great for a one-shot anyway! hope you write more AR stuff...
Ava S
10Ava SimbelmyneYAY! that's really exciting that hes going to be adopted! (in this fic) Really good! I like the idea as well...with how he was being broadcasted and all... I bet you could turn this into a multi chapter if you put in more detail and background/in between stuff. Great for a one-shot anyway! hope you write more AR stuff...
Ava S
8/29/2015 c1 26Skiewrites
Hey! Btw, I love your story. If you're looking for a belta, I have a different account that goes by the name skiewrites. Just MP if you need one.
26SkiewritesHey! Btw, I love your story. If you're looking for a belta, I have a different account that goes by the name skiewrites. Just MP if you need one.
8/24/2015 c1 dacotilana
I like these kind of stories.
And this was a good one.
But some things were just way to random.
Like Alex telling his family history to the whole wide world?
And Joe adopting him, and him accepting without second guessing?
I would rather call this a parody of these kind of Alex Rider stories.
But still. Nice writing with hardly any mistakes. That's rare!
I like these kind of stories.
And this was a good one.
But some things were just way to random.
Like Alex telling his family history to the whole wide world?
And Joe adopting him, and him accepting without second guessing?
I would rather call this a parody of these kind of Alex Rider stories.
But still. Nice writing with hardly any mistakes. That's rare!
8/19/2015 c1 Guest
This is really good. You are an awesome writer, I really hope you continue this story.
This is really good. You are an awesome writer, I really hope you continue this story.
8/13/2015 c1 Shamwow
I'm SO EXCITED to see this story progress. This first chapter demonstrates so much promise for an awesome story. If this is the product of a slow day at work I hope for the sake of reading a great story and the Alex Rider fandom that you will have more of those days. Can't wait for your next update!
Shammy :)
I'm SO EXCITED to see this story progress. This first chapter demonstrates so much promise for an awesome story. If this is the product of a slow day at work I hope for the sake of reading a great story and the Alex Rider fandom that you will have more of those days. Can't wait for your next update!
Shammy :)