for A Cadmean Victory8/15/2015 c6 
21Scott the Wanderer
Interesting tale we have here. We have a more mature Harry. We have a little more interesting jealous Ron. A real Moody in the castle (I hope.) A perfectionist jealous Hermione.
I do see a possible potions plot, but this time from a source we just never expected before. If I am reading it right Hermione might be our potioner. That has to be new.
21Scott the WandererInteresting tale we have here. We have a more mature Harry. We have a little more interesting jealous Ron. A real Moody in the castle (I hope.) A perfectionist jealous Hermione.
I do see a possible potions plot, but this time from a source we just never expected before. If I am reading it right Hermione might be our potioner. That has to be new.
8/15/2015 c1 9blassreitter
Amortentia! Don't trust the Weasleys! Don't trust the Bookwurm Hermione! In book five or six Molly spoke about dosing her husband with amortentia so you can already don't trust them. Harry must cut all connection with them. I believes that Harry has been dosed with amortentia or else he would never date an ugly troll like Ginny Weasley.
He need other friends like Katie Bell, Angelic Johnson, Susan bones, Daphne Greengrass and more, not those backstabbers like the Weasleys and Hermione.
9blassreitterAmortentia! Don't trust the Weasleys! Don't trust the Bookwurm Hermione! In book five or six Molly spoke about dosing her husband with amortentia so you can already don't trust them. Harry must cut all connection with them. I believes that Harry has been dosed with amortentia or else he would never date an ugly troll like Ginny Weasley.
He need other friends like Katie Bell, Angelic Johnson, Susan bones, Daphne Greengrass and more, not those backstabbers like the Weasleys and Hermione.
8/15/2015 c6 jslee102
Enjoying the stories. The idea of swarm of butterflies is amusing. Not sure it would act as a shield as a lot of the spells generate so much damage.
Enjoying the stories. The idea of swarm of butterflies is amusing. Not sure it would act as a shield as a lot of the spells generate so much damage.
8/15/2015 c5 DaRAGingLunatic
have done well. Cant wait for more or until the other schools arrive. Please keep up the good work.
have done well. Cant wait for more or until the other schools arrive. Please keep up the good work.
8/15/2015 c5 The Shadowman
Another excellent chapter, I love what you are doing to harry increasing his power while his social life falls which forms a nice balance.
Another excellent chapter, I love what you are doing to harry increasing his power while his social life falls which forms a nice balance.
8/15/2015 c5 TheHabberdashery
This is fantastic :) I really do like Harry being the introvert that his conditions would have realistically forced him to be without unambiguously being the new dark lord.
I also like your dialogue a lot.
This is fantastic :) I really do like Harry being the introvert that his conditions would have realistically forced him to be without unambiguously being the new dark lord.
I also like your dialogue a lot.
8/14/2015 c4 The Shadowman
I love your writing style so far it flows very smoothly. I can't wait to see what you do next in this.
I love your writing style so far it flows very smoothly. I can't wait to see what you do next in this.
8/14/2015 c4 sRxAfrikaner
This is going to be a phenomenal story. Please keep going. I can't wait for the challenges. You're going to make the so much better.
This is going to be a phenomenal story. Please keep going. I can't wait for the challenges. You're going to make the so much better.
8/14/2015 c2 doxiesmom14
I am enjoying your story and can't wait to read more. What is up with Hermione, she is being more rude than usual and who is she going to dose? Harry needs to rethink her as a friend, she isn't a very good one.
I am enjoying your story and can't wait to read more. What is up with Hermione, she is being more rude than usual and who is she going to dose? Harry needs to rethink her as a friend, she isn't a very good one.