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12/27/2015 c2 14kiernanfan
"IF YOU LOVED HER, YOU WOULD'VE FOUGHT FOR HER..." The funny thing is that it was Ben, not Danny who went to Riley when she went back to New Jersey and threatened to leave their lives together. It was Ben who fought Ross for Riley, while Danny gloated at Ben's lack of success. Meanwhile, Danny didn't leave Ashley because he realized he loved Riley more, but because of his own stupidity and because of Ben's fortuitous intervention. And Ben helps Danny three times get Riley, and when Danny is miffed over Riley's reaction to his proposal, it's Ben who again smooths things over. Boy, Danny takes offense easily.
8/20/2015 c1 Vegas 91
Please update!
8/16/2015 c1 17Flutemelody
Great story so far! The characters are a little out of character but although then that, it's a great start.

Also, make sure you re read your chapters when you are done writing them. I saw some mistakes, but nothing too horrible.

Can't wait to read more. :)

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