3/21/2019 c1 desconocido-11
han-pasado-mas-de-tres-años
el-autor-destino-desaparecido
y-esta-gran-historia-in-conclusa-donde-quera-que-este-te-extrañamos
y-también-a-tu-contenido
firma-atentamente
desconocido-11
han-pasado-mas-de-tres-años
el-autor-destino-desaparecido
y-esta-gran-historia-in-conclusa-donde-quera-que-este-te-extrañamos
y-también-a-tu-contenido
firma-atentamente
desconocido-11
3/3/2019 c1 xSean
Outrunning a Bullet Train puts you on the same level as characters like Naruto? Don't make me laugh dude, while it isn't really apparent in the anime Naruto is faster than light. If you ever had a look at the databooks you would know this. You are heavily underestimating the Naruto Universe.
Outrunning a Bullet Train puts you on the same level as characters like Naruto? Don't make me laugh dude, while it isn't really apparent in the anime Naruto is faster than light. If you ever had a look at the databooks you would know this. You are heavily underestimating the Naruto Universe.
1/27/2019 c3 Guest
Great story. Hope you update soon, hopefully. Hehehe
Great story. Hope you update soon, hopefully. Hehehe
10/12/2018 c3 1The Great Dullahan
woa a shame that this wanst update in 2 years it is very cool you combine various characters of different anime very well not leaving holes in the plot
woa a shame that this wanst update in 2 years it is very cool you combine various characters of different anime very well not leaving holes in the plot
7/27/2018 c3 Guest
Please update. Please!
Please update. Please!
6/24/2018 c1 5Beast Mode92
I've tried a few times, but I just can't get past this first chapter. I don't understand why you had to make so many changes to Naruto as I have them coming baby and grow up again. He was already a Shinobi there was no reason to have you do that. All you really did was make him and all the bijuu completely OC characters. There was no need to make changes to Naruto like this.
I've tried a few times, but I just can't get past this first chapter. I don't understand why you had to make so many changes to Naruto as I have them coming baby and grow up again. He was already a Shinobi there was no reason to have you do that. All you really did was make him and all the bijuu completely OC characters. There was no need to make changes to Naruto like this.
4/23/2018 c3 18Darkmagicdragon
I say you make it a harem. Naruto deserves it, especially after all he's been through.
I say you make it a harem. Naruto deserves it, especially after all he's been through.
3/1/2018 c3 SaitamaXGenos
(Reads ridertwinmitsuru’s reviews)
Really?!
I had no idea!
The nerve of some people!
(Reads ridertwinmitsuru’s reviews)
Really?!
I had no idea!
The nerve of some people!
3/1/2018 c3 ridertwinmitsuru
Here’s proof from magna ryunoid’s story “Kamen Rider Kage” that shows they copied some scenes from you story and put it in their story without asking for your permission:
The store clerk pointed to his general address and found the location of the bean sprouts. He also noticed that a little girl with black hair was jumping up and down trying to reach the can that was located on the top shelf.
He thought of himself for a fraction of a second before approaching the girl and lifting her onto his shoulders.
"Hey, what do you think you're doing ?!" the little girl screamed looking at the hooded teenager. "
"... I assumed you wanted to do it yourself," Shun replied
The girl looked like she had just been slapped before she puffed up her cheeks. She quickly grabbed one of the cans of bean sprouts that Shun put back. The girl walked away, but not before turning to stare at him,
"Do not think I'll thank you Baka! Baka!" she growled
Shun blinked at what the girl just said and then shrugged, "It has not even been thirty minutes since I've been in this city and now someone calls me an idiot, what can you do?" He said to himself, grabbing the Second can of bean sprouts, he went forward and went to the front of the store.
The purple-haired teenager walked to the front of the store and found a very interesting scene.
"Where is our protection money, old man?" Asked a rather large, menacing man dressed in black leather with a satisfied smile.
The old man began to tremble- "Please, I do not have enough money to pay him and pay the bills, I just need a little more time."
"That sounds less like a 'my problem' and more like your problem," said the bully.
Another of the thugs asked. "How about we stop at the casino and pick up the waitress that you love so much?"
The boss grinned lasciviously at the idea of hitting the counter-waitress while clinging to that long silver hair and that nice round ass.
"And the button has been pushed," Shun thought before breaking the muscles in his neck.
(five minutes later…)
"That would be all?" the merchant asked.
Shun nodded as he absently kicked the big man who was harassing the store owner just a few moments ago ...
The man moaned in pain when the boy who had just kicked his ass and those of his group came out the door.
The second that came out of the hooded teenager almost approaches another person. He stopped just in time to avoid running into the figure and it seemed that the figure stopped just in time also gave the right time to observe the characteristics of the figure in front of him.
The figure was definitely a woman if the big bust and wide hips were something to go through. She had light brown hair made with curls topped by a pink ribbon and a pair of water-green eyes.
That girl looked at Shun, allowing her to see his face. The girl's eyes found dark purple hair wondering if it was natural, in addition to her bright yellow eyes like stars
"Gomen / Gomensai", both said to each other as Shun went on his way.
The girl was removed as for some reason the face of that boy was made familiar as if he remembered something important.
"Haruka-sama!"
The now-named Haruka quickly came out of her trance and looked down to find her pseudo little-eyed little sister staring at her.
"Yes-Mirai?" she said
"I got the bean sprouts that Yomi sent us here," Mirai said, looking surprised at her pseudo older sister.
The black haired girl had never seen Haruka for a second, not even once, so she was a little worried for a moment. Haruka nodded, "Let's go our way," he said, taking the initiative and taking one last look in the direction the purple-haired boy had traveled.
Here’s proof from magna ryunoid’s story “Kamen Rider Kage” that shows they copied some scenes from you story and put it in their story without asking for your permission:
The store clerk pointed to his general address and found the location of the bean sprouts. He also noticed that a little girl with black hair was jumping up and down trying to reach the can that was located on the top shelf.
He thought of himself for a fraction of a second before approaching the girl and lifting her onto his shoulders.
"Hey, what do you think you're doing ?!" the little girl screamed looking at the hooded teenager. "
"... I assumed you wanted to do it yourself," Shun replied
The girl looked like she had just been slapped before she puffed up her cheeks. She quickly grabbed one of the cans of bean sprouts that Shun put back. The girl walked away, but not before turning to stare at him,
"Do not think I'll thank you Baka! Baka!" she growled
Shun blinked at what the girl just said and then shrugged, "It has not even been thirty minutes since I've been in this city and now someone calls me an idiot, what can you do?" He said to himself, grabbing the Second can of bean sprouts, he went forward and went to the front of the store.
The purple-haired teenager walked to the front of the store and found a very interesting scene.
"Where is our protection money, old man?" Asked a rather large, menacing man dressed in black leather with a satisfied smile.
The old man began to tremble- "Please, I do not have enough money to pay him and pay the bills, I just need a little more time."
"That sounds less like a 'my problem' and more like your problem," said the bully.
Another of the thugs asked. "How about we stop at the casino and pick up the waitress that you love so much?"
The boss grinned lasciviously at the idea of hitting the counter-waitress while clinging to that long silver hair and that nice round ass.
"And the button has been pushed," Shun thought before breaking the muscles in his neck.
(five minutes later…)
"That would be all?" the merchant asked.
Shun nodded as he absently kicked the big man who was harassing the store owner just a few moments ago ...
The man moaned in pain when the boy who had just kicked his ass and those of his group came out the door.
The second that came out of the hooded teenager almost approaches another person. He stopped just in time to avoid running into the figure and it seemed that the figure stopped just in time also gave the right time to observe the characteristics of the figure in front of him.
The figure was definitely a woman if the big bust and wide hips were something to go through. She had light brown hair made with curls topped by a pink ribbon and a pair of water-green eyes.
That girl looked at Shun, allowing her to see his face. The girl's eyes found dark purple hair wondering if it was natural, in addition to her bright yellow eyes like stars
"Gomen / Gomensai", both said to each other as Shun went on his way.
The girl was removed as for some reason the face of that boy was made familiar as if he remembered something important.
"Haruka-sama!"
The now-named Haruka quickly came out of her trance and looked down to find her pseudo little-eyed little sister staring at her.
"Yes-Mirai?" she said
"I got the bean sprouts that Yomi sent us here," Mirai said, looking surprised at her pseudo older sister.
The black haired girl had never seen Haruka for a second, not even once, so she was a little worried for a moment. Haruka nodded, "Let's go our way," he said, taking the initiative and taking one last look in the direction the purple-haired boy had traveled.
3/1/2018 c3 ridertwinmitsuru
Why in the world did autocorrect change “running” into “rubbing”? -_-
Sorry about that.
Why in the world did autocorrect change “running” into “rubbing”? -_-
Sorry about that.
3/1/2018 c3 ridertwinmitsuru
Just thought I should let you know, author, but a author by the name of magna ryunoid copied some scenes from your story (specifically Chapter 3) and put it in their “Kamen Rider Kage” story (specifically Chapter 2).
What to specifically look for that they copied from you:
1) Shun helping Mirai with bean sprouts
2) Shun beating up thugs after they harrass store clerk and mention a silver-haired waitress
3) Shun rubbing into Haruka
I think there were more, but those were the main things that I noticed they copied from your story.
Just thought I should let you know, author, but a author by the name of magna ryunoid copied some scenes from your story (specifically Chapter 3) and put it in their “Kamen Rider Kage” story (specifically Chapter 2).
What to specifically look for that they copied from you:
1) Shun helping Mirai with bean sprouts
2) Shun beating up thugs after they harrass store clerk and mention a silver-haired waitress
3) Shun rubbing into Haruka
I think there were more, but those were the main things that I noticed they copied from your story.
2/12/2018 c3 kerry.wallace40
Okatana
Halberd
Naginata
Espada #2 release axe
And an honest to god reaper scythe for shinju make it scary as fuck
Okatana
Halberd
Naginata
Espada #2 release axe
And an honest to god reaper scythe for shinju make it scary as fuck