for The Fox Scroll2/25/2016 c19 King Of Voltage
Great chapter again, although i am upset that i didnt see anyone from the elemental nations yet, im realllllly looking forward to that (I know that there is a time difference, but dangit i want to see it XD). I liked it how you showed ivan having an interest in naruto, it shows that more fun is going to come this way. Cant wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work :)
Great chapter again, although i am upset that i didnt see anyone from the elemental nations yet, im realllllly looking forward to that (I know that there is a time difference, but dangit i want to see it XD). I liked it how you showed ivan having an interest in naruto, it shows that more fun is going to come this way. Cant wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work :)
2/25/2016 c19 
1mallets2012
Thanls for the update! Awesome as always and i really enjoyed this chapter...if Ivan comes back how will Naruto react or what will he do? So many possibilities so i can't wait to see what happens
1mallets2012Thanls for the update! Awesome as always and i really enjoyed this chapter...if Ivan comes back how will Naruto react or what will he do? So many possibilities so i can't wait to see what happens
2/25/2016 c19 TheManWhoStandsAboveAll
When the group get here, is sakura hits naruto this where I stop reading. That was something no one likes and it's plain annoying
When the group get here, is sakura hits naruto this where I stop reading. That was something no one likes and it's plain annoying
2/24/2016 c19 VortexTundra
I can't wait till the Konoha group gets there. Imagine the troubles they can all get into!
I can't wait till the Konoha group gets there. Imagine the troubles they can all get into!
2/24/2016 c19 Mzr90
Pretty cool chapter. Everyone in character and did like the moments between Lucy and Naruto. Also any chance Flare can be added to naritos potential harem?
Pretty cool chapter. Everyone in character and did like the moments between Lucy and Naruto. Also any chance Flare can be added to naritos potential harem?
2/24/2016 c19 27redlox2
thanks for thw quick update:) this was a good chapter to see the rivalry between Lucy and Juvia over Naruto:D huh i didn't notice the whole "time difference" thing but it makes sense:)
I honestly think the Wendy and Naruto thing was more likely a joke than anything as you seem to be hinting that they will be close as siblings:D am i on the right track?
ok i have been wondering this for awhile the fox like appearance (slitted eyes) of Naruto new Sage Mode doesn't actually mean he is using Kurama's chakra as well right? it is merely a representation of how his "magic" looks like? if he could combine magic, Senjutsu and Kurama chakra would it be like basically the same except he would get the whiskers enhanced like Kurama Tailed Beast Mode?
interesting that Naruto has personally met some members of Raven Tail already...
24 hour race next chapter!
27redlox2thanks for thw quick update:) this was a good chapter to see the rivalry between Lucy and Juvia over Naruto:D huh i didn't notice the whole "time difference" thing but it makes sense:)
I honestly think the Wendy and Naruto thing was more likely a joke than anything as you seem to be hinting that they will be close as siblings:D am i on the right track?
ok i have been wondering this for awhile the fox like appearance (slitted eyes) of Naruto new Sage Mode doesn't actually mean he is using Kurama's chakra as well right? it is merely a representation of how his "magic" looks like? if he could combine magic, Senjutsu and Kurama chakra would it be like basically the same except he would get the whiskers enhanced like Kurama Tailed Beast Mode?
interesting that Naruto has personally met some members of Raven Tail already...
24 hour race next chapter!
2/22/2016 c18 Guest
Indroduce some more characters from sakura,kakashi,shikamaru,& hinata some slight naruhina fun
Indroduce some more characters from sakura,kakashi,shikamaru,& hinata some slight naruhina fun
2/21/2016 c18 Gaby
AWESOME! I just love it, please update soon im dying to see the konoha people arrive
AWESOME! I just love it, please update soon im dying to see the konoha people arrive
2/16/2016 c1 Guest
Noce story i like all the interactions so far. I'm still wondering if this going to be a single pairing story or a harem. If it is i hope lucy juvia mira and weza are in narutos harem
Noce story i like all the interactions so far. I'm still wondering if this going to be a single pairing story or a harem. If it is i hope lucy juvia mira and weza are in narutos harem
2/16/2016 c18 King Of Voltage
Finally caught up, great story, I like the spead of the story, while its not as slow as i usually like, its not by any means to fast. The characters are all great, and the fights are also pretty good. This is a super underrated story, keep up the work :)
Finally caught up, great story, I like the spead of the story, while its not as slow as i usually like, its not by any means to fast. The characters are all great, and the fights are also pretty good. This is a super underrated story, keep up the work :)
2/16/2016 c4 meowy1986
Eh you do realize naruto never lsoes bets right? so how can he lose a bet with erza? lol naruto isnt tide to fate which means he can lose bets why do you think like 0% of authors make naruto really *lucky* at gambling and he always wins? and pleaze dont make naruto lose to erza or evne tie with her.. i mean you have to think about how the pwoer lvls work here.. erza was put to sleep when mystogan came in and naruto wasnt.. hell even the guild master was kinda falling a sleep in the anime.. so if naruto can stay awake fully aware of his surrondings unlike makrov then its ovbious erza wouldnt stand a chance against naruto
Eh you do realize naruto never lsoes bets right? so how can he lose a bet with erza? lol naruto isnt tide to fate which means he can lose bets why do you think like 0% of authors make naruto really *lucky* at gambling and he always wins? and pleaze dont make naruto lose to erza or evne tie with her.. i mean you have to think about how the pwoer lvls work here.. erza was put to sleep when mystogan came in and naruto wasnt.. hell even the guild master was kinda falling a sleep in the anime.. so if naruto can stay awake fully aware of his surrondings unlike makrov then its ovbious erza wouldnt stand a chance against naruto
2/16/2016 c2 meowy1986
Meh story is alright so far.. but i hate when authors make shippuden naruto just completely fucking retarted still saying believe it and shit or acting like an immature fucking idiot yelling and acting like hes 10 years old when hes obviously like 18 in this story.
Meh story is alright so far.. but i hate when authors make shippuden naruto just completely fucking retarted still saying believe it and shit or acting like an immature fucking idiot yelling and acting like hes 10 years old when hes obviously like 18 in this story.
2/16/2016 c1 meowy1986
Eh? no offence but you do realize naruto has toad summons right? this is def after the 4th shinobi war so wouldnt naruto jsut summon the toads to reverse summon him? and 2" would make sence if since narutos not dead which means his name didnt get marked off the scroll of summonings which means the toads after hearing about how naruto vanished could easily look for him by reverse sumoning him to the toad world then back to the elemental nations
Eh? no offence but you do realize naruto has toad summons right? this is def after the 4th shinobi war so wouldnt naruto jsut summon the toads to reverse summon him? and 2" would make sence if since narutos not dead which means his name didnt get marked off the scroll of summonings which means the toads after hearing about how naruto vanished could easily look for him by reverse sumoning him to the toad world then back to the elemental nations