for The Fox Scroll9/14/2015 c7 bobina
this is good
this is good
9/15/2015 c8 Reemikz
i hope you have some ideas to improve naruto because you seamed to seriously under power sage mode it can easily be compared to dragon force in fact its most likely better and stronger than dragon force
i hope you have some ideas to improve naruto because you seamed to seriously under power sage mode it can easily be compared to dragon force in fact its most likely better and stronger than dragon force
9/10/2015 c7 Ryner510
Lol can't tell if Lucy is mad or jealous, so I go with both xD
Anyway does that mean Juvis like Naruto instead of Gary? Not that I don't mind. Just wondering :3
Lol can't tell if Lucy is mad or jealous, so I go with both xD
Anyway does that mean Juvis like Naruto instead of Gary? Not that I don't mind. Just wondering :3
9/10/2015 c7 
27redlox2
Wow Lucy tries to name Naruto "flaws" and all Juvia hears is "Raman addict":) she really does love Naruto doesn't she:) Naruto would not be Naruto if he wasn't dense:) I love this chapter and hope the tower of heaven arc wraps up next chapter or one after.
Thanks for updating!
27redlox2Wow Lucy tries to name Naruto "flaws" and all Juvia hears is "Raman addict":) she really does love Naruto doesn't she:) Naruto would not be Naruto if he wasn't dense:) I love this chapter and hope the tower of heaven arc wraps up next chapter or one after.
Thanks for updating!
8/28/2015 c6 varok
buen fic suena interesante !
buen fic suena interesante !
8/29/2015 c6 3darkanomoly
It's a good story, very well paced and and your grammar is good. However when I read your story I feel like I'm reading a play. It's all dialogue and not much description. Work on that.
3darkanomolyIt's a good story, very well paced and and your grammar is good. However when I read your story I feel like I'm reading a play. It's all dialogue and not much description. Work on that.
8/28/2015 c6 1Storyteller D132
I do think this story is totaly awesome
And i do love the idee of natsu and Lucy as a team but every one think they are a couple
1Storyteller D132I do think this story is totaly awesome
And i do love the idee of natsu and Lucy as a team but every one think they are a couple
8/27/2015 c6 SPark681
Nice chapter wonder what the giant furball was gonna say anyways keep up the great work!
Nice chapter wonder what the giant furball was gonna say anyways keep up the great work!
8/26/2015 c6 27redlox2
I am betting the true reason why Naruto took a solo mission was so you could focus on Naruto while Lucy goes on the theatre mission with the others (without Naruto "horning" in)...
I don't mind Naruto and Lucy but would like it even more if you could add Mira as well:) of course it is just the beginning so we can just wait and see what the future will be like:)
So a version 1 tailed Naruto was capable of defeating a S-Rank and a wizard saint with ease (albeit presumably one of the weaker of the 10)...
27redlox2I am betting the true reason why Naruto took a solo mission was so you could focus on Naruto while Lucy goes on the theatre mission with the others (without Naruto "horning" in)...
I don't mind Naruto and Lucy but would like it even more if you could add Mira as well:) of course it is just the beginning so we can just wait and see what the future will be like:)
So a version 1 tailed Naruto was capable of defeating a S-Rank and a wizard saint with ease (albeit presumably one of the weaker of the 10)...
8/22/2015 c4 i last read this
may hap 4 days ago, and already I've got two more chapters to read, I've. one thing to say, repeatedly
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
the end. please don't push yourself, but seriously, its a good and fun read.
take care, Bannana422 ( i know its a wierd name, there's a story behind that)
may hap 4 days ago, and already I've got two more chapters to read, I've. one thing to say, repeatedly
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
the end. please don't push yourself, but seriously, its a good and fun read.
take care, Bannana422 ( i know its a wierd name, there's a story behind that)