for The Fox Scroll8/23/2015 c5 
2TheKidHokage
Why do people who make storys so good a cliffhangers great story 10/10 ign would read again
2TheKidHokageWhy do people who make storys so good a cliffhangers great story 10/10 ign would read again
8/23/2015 c5 12JensenDaniels32
Please upload the next chapter either today or tomorrow. I hate cliffhangers with a vengeance...
12JensenDaniels32Please upload the next chapter either today or tomorrow. I hate cliffhangers with a vengeance...
8/21/2015 c4 Jay
This is pretty cool. It would have been pretty bad ass for Deliora to be resurrected and have Naruto beat the shit out of him. I think Erza should make Naruto her slave and make him get her cake all the time. I can't wait for the next one.
This is pretty cool. It would have been pretty bad ass for Deliora to be resurrected and have Naruto beat the shit out of him. I think Erza should make Naruto her slave and make him get her cake all the time. I can't wait for the next one.
8/22/2015 c4 SPark681
Hmm what punishment awaits Naruto and what Erza will request now that she won the bet anyways keep up the great work!
Hmm what punishment awaits Naruto and what Erza will request now that she won the bet anyways keep up the great work!
8/21/2015 c4 daniel 29
but would naruto even want to go home I mean he has pretty much everything he'll ever want in fairy tale
but would naruto even want to go home I mean he has pretty much everything he'll ever want in fairy tale
8/21/2015 c3 3Blindguy95
Im curious to see how it goes. The only issue i have is that i feel your movibg too fast through the scenes... I know its canon and everyone knows how it goes but your blowibg through it pretty fast its hurting the flow of the story in my opinion (:
3Blindguy95Im curious to see how it goes. The only issue i have is that i feel your movibg too fast through the scenes... I know its canon and everyone knows how it goes but your blowibg through it pretty fast its hurting the flow of the story in my opinion (:
8/21/2015 c4 12JensenDaniels32
HEY! You can't punish Naruto when he hasn't even gotten his stamp yet! What the Hell are you thinking, man?! He's not officially a member UNTIL he gets the stamp on his hand, duh!
12JensenDaniels32HEY! You can't punish Naruto when he hasn't even gotten his stamp yet! What the Hell are you thinking, man?! He's not officially a member UNTIL he gets the stamp on his hand, duh!
8/21/2015 c4 27redlox2
I think on his left hand would be pretty good as I think his right hand is reserved Dr Rikudo Yang Power (which I hope he will get)! Pretty good chapter and I liked how you wrapped up the arc in one chapter!
27redlox2I think on his left hand would be pretty good as I think his right hand is reserved Dr Rikudo Yang Power (which I hope he will get)! Pretty good chapter and I liked how you wrapped up the arc in one chapter!
8/20/2015 c3 El Frijolero
Wow this story is amazing and I noticed a minor error in which you spelled Erzas name like Ezra but other than that good job :)
Wow this story is amazing and I noticed a minor error in which you spelled Erzas name like Ezra but other than that good job :)
8/19/2015 c3 27redlox2
So Naruto in fact had the key but will unlikely use it as he hasn't gotten the "training" from B yet right? Pretty good chapter and I like how Naruto is prorated so far! Can't wait for more!
27redlox2So Naruto in fact had the key but will unlikely use it as he hasn't gotten the "training" from B yet right? Pretty good chapter and I like how Naruto is prorated so far! Can't wait for more!
8/17/2015 c1 Guest
Please continue
Please continue
8/16/2015 c1 Guest
also does he have Kyuubi mode
also does he have Kyuubi mode