for The Fox Scroll2/6/2019 c9 Guest
He should have a tongue scarf when in sage mode
He should have a tongue scarf when in sage mode
1/22/2019 c20 
9Leasla7373
Amigo tu historia es fantástica,la forma en la que narras y haces que los personajes tenga su mismo toque
9Leasla7373Amigo tu historia es fantástica,la forma en la que narras y haces que los personajes tenga su mismo toque
1/20/2019 c1 Guest
Waiting for this to be updated pls do so
Waiting for this to be updated pls do so
12/24/2018 c51 Elchabon
Great chapter.
Ha.
Waiting for the continuation.
Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Great chapter.
Ha.
Waiting for the continuation.
Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
12/10/2018 c23 3MrChubbyGames
Unfortunately I have to stop reading this story, I simply cannot stand when Sakura is in a story With Naruto where she judges him for things. Like seriously she got pissed at him for kissing a girl, what the actual f***, that’s not a character trait like jealousy, that’s just emotional abuse. Who’s to say naruto can’t have started a relationship with Lucy? What part of that is Sakura’s business? Like all she’s doing is making him afraid of contact with girls because he’s afraid they will hit him or attack him in some way. The only saving grace is that Hinata understands that she has no room to be upset with him for their attraction to him, like it’s not his fault they like him and it’s not even theirs really.
3MrChubbyGamesUnfortunately I have to stop reading this story, I simply cannot stand when Sakura is in a story With Naruto where she judges him for things. Like seriously she got pissed at him for kissing a girl, what the actual f***, that’s not a character trait like jealousy, that’s just emotional abuse. Who’s to say naruto can’t have started a relationship with Lucy? What part of that is Sakura’s business? Like all she’s doing is making him afraid of contact with girls because he’s afraid they will hit him or attack him in some way. The only saving grace is that Hinata understands that she has no room to be upset with him for their attraction to him, like it’s not his fault they like him and it’s not even theirs really.
12/9/2018 c21 KrapyKocaineKlub
Ok, I know I may have sounded a bit ranty/flaming these past couple chapters, but in my defense at this point I should say that I remember too much fanon and too little canon. And I seriously hate both Sakura and Sasuke with a burning passion, I mean seriously, what the fuck is that bitch’s problem? She has no personality beyond her shallow obsession with the Uchiha, and she has no right to use Naruto as her doormat and expect him to take her bullshit. Now I’d go into a whole monologue as to why I dislike Sasuke, besides him being a whiny bitch who serves no purpose to the actual story than a worn out plot thread and shock value, but the real reason I’m posting this is for another request for Erza to be paired with Naruto. Now for anybody who might say that Erza is like Sakura, let me make something clear... Erza is beautiful, strong, considerate, and courageous. And Sakura’s... not. Think about it, all she’s ever done through the whole damn series is dawn over Sasuke like a housewife making excuses for her abusive husband, and when it comes to Naruto she is a total bitch.
Anyway...
I’m gonna have to request again... PAIR NARUTO WITH ERZA PLEASE! Why are there not enough fanfics of them?! It makes me want to cry! And you said it yourself, Erza was placed as Number 3! So the top three girls get to be with our boy Naruto! Hell, I’m willing to bet money that Kushina would approve of Erza!
Ok, I know I may have sounded a bit ranty/flaming these past couple chapters, but in my defense at this point I should say that I remember too much fanon and too little canon. And I seriously hate both Sakura and Sasuke with a burning passion, I mean seriously, what the fuck is that bitch’s problem? She has no personality beyond her shallow obsession with the Uchiha, and she has no right to use Naruto as her doormat and expect him to take her bullshit. Now I’d go into a whole monologue as to why I dislike Sasuke, besides him being a whiny bitch who serves no purpose to the actual story than a worn out plot thread and shock value, but the real reason I’m posting this is for another request for Erza to be paired with Naruto. Now for anybody who might say that Erza is like Sakura, let me make something clear... Erza is beautiful, strong, considerate, and courageous. And Sakura’s... not. Think about it, all she’s ever done through the whole damn series is dawn over Sasuke like a housewife making excuses for her abusive husband, and when it comes to Naruto she is a total bitch.
Anyway...
I’m gonna have to request again... PAIR NARUTO WITH ERZA PLEASE! Why are there not enough fanfics of them?! It makes me want to cry! And you said it yourself, Erza was placed as Number 3! So the top three girls get to be with our boy Naruto! Hell, I’m willing to bet money that Kushina would approve of Erza!
12/8/2018 c21 KrapyKocaineKlub
You know... it’s time like these that remind me as to why I’ve grown to distaste canon Naruto. His childish demeanor gets to the point that it’s insufferably obnoxious, along with his borderline homosexual obsession with the Uchiha prick (Which Tenten states directly so well in this chapter BTW) his so called ‘crush’ on an insensitive titless bitch who he let’s walk all over him and you have the components for an irksome character that had so much potential that has been allowed to go to waste. Just for once it’d be nice to see him be a real ninja, instead of a retarded circus freak letting other people walk all over him like stairs! GOD FUCKING DAMN IT! He’s the main character here! Why waste what his growth?! It’s pathetic watching him beg like a whore!
You know... it’s time like these that remind me as to why I’ve grown to distaste canon Naruto. His childish demeanor gets to the point that it’s insufferably obnoxious, along with his borderline homosexual obsession with the Uchiha prick (Which Tenten states directly so well in this chapter BTW) his so called ‘crush’ on an insensitive titless bitch who he let’s walk all over him and you have the components for an irksome character that had so much potential that has been allowed to go to waste. Just for once it’d be nice to see him be a real ninja, instead of a retarded circus freak letting other people walk all over him like stairs! GOD FUCKING DAMN IT! He’s the main character here! Why waste what his growth?! It’s pathetic watching him beg like a whore!
11/28/2018 c48 Guest
So did cana have her way with naruto
So did cana have her way with naruto
11/28/2018 c48 Guest
So did cana have narutos clones turn back to naruto then had her way with them
So did cana have narutos clones turn back to naruto then had her way with them
11/27/2018 c51 KrapyKocaineKlub
Add Erza! Please add Erza! I’m begging ya! I can’t find a single fix alive with her and Naruto! And even though I prefer fanfiction Naruto to canon Naruto these days, I can never find a committed fic with the two of them! Even though I’ve only started watching Fairy Tail a couple months ago, Erza is already Bae, and it sickens me that she’s shipped with the asshole who done irredeemable things to her! She can seriously do so much better!
Also, could you have Naruto learn how to use a sword? And perhaps not make him so unbearably ignorant, naive or obnoxious all the damn time? It annoys me that Kishimoto never bothered to have him learn anything outside of clones or Rasengan, or sponging off Kurama’s chakra! Am I the only one who sees the hypocrisy in this context?! It’d also
And most importantly, do NOT crop his hair short, or have that stupid fake arm! It just looks so... wrong. So very very wrong! His “adult” look just feels so lame compared to other looks designed by fans. And again it’s like I’m the only one who finds his short hair to look so lame!
Sorry if I sounded a bit ranty towards the end, but please add Erza!
Add Erza! Please add Erza! I’m begging ya! I can’t find a single fix alive with her and Naruto! And even though I prefer fanfiction Naruto to canon Naruto these days, I can never find a committed fic with the two of them! Even though I’ve only started watching Fairy Tail a couple months ago, Erza is already Bae, and it sickens me that she’s shipped with the asshole who done irredeemable things to her! She can seriously do so much better!
Also, could you have Naruto learn how to use a sword? And perhaps not make him so unbearably ignorant, naive or obnoxious all the damn time? It annoys me that Kishimoto never bothered to have him learn anything outside of clones or Rasengan, or sponging off Kurama’s chakra! Am I the only one who sees the hypocrisy in this context?! It’d also
And most importantly, do NOT crop his hair short, or have that stupid fake arm! It just looks so... wrong. So very very wrong! His “adult” look just feels so lame compared to other looks designed by fans. And again it’s like I’m the only one who finds his short hair to look so lame!
Sorry if I sounded a bit ranty towards the end, but please add Erza!
11/25/2018 c1 Guest
Well we see who's in the harem are lucy, juvia, mira, erza, wendy, cana,
Well we see who's in the harem are lucy, juvia, mira, erza, wendy, cana,