for The Fox Scroll9/7/2018 c50 
2Bonkey1996
Juvia FTW BABY! But I also like Wendy and Lucy too. But I strongly feel Juvia is the number one girl for Naruto.
2Bonkey1996Juvia FTW BABY! But I also like Wendy and Lucy too. But I strongly feel Juvia is the number one girl for Naruto.
9/7/2018 c50 XXX777
Can't wait for part two. So Carla respected Naruto until the couples rumors started? Damn it Jason!
Can't wait for part two. So Carla respected Naruto until the couples rumors started? Damn it Jason!
9/7/2018 c50 doomqwer
a good chapter although i do look forward to hades getting the boot out of narutos body
a good chapter although i do look forward to hades getting the boot out of narutos body
9/7/2018 c50 27redlox2
Teehe lucky 50 (I guess 49 if you discount the break chapter). Natsu new node appears fairly primal right now but maybe he can be the game change Fairy Tail needs as Grimori Heart has Naruto in their side right now technically... Poor Erz shaving to fight one of her closest friends.. I hope Wendy wakes up soon and finally confronts Carla about her attitude towards Naruto! This chapter help get some things straight with Carla..
27redlox2Teehe lucky 50 (I guess 49 if you discount the break chapter). Natsu new node appears fairly primal right now but maybe he can be the game change Fairy Tail needs as Grimori Heart has Naruto in their side right now technically... Poor Erz shaving to fight one of her closest friends.. I hope Wendy wakes up soon and finally confronts Carla about her attitude towards Naruto! This chapter help get some things straight with Carla..
9/5/2018 c44 YuukiAsuna-Chan
Oh damn, could this end up Mavis/Naruto as well? Oh i hope so, so few fics with Mavis in the pairing.
Oh damn, could this end up Mavis/Naruto as well? Oh i hope so, so few fics with Mavis in the pairing.
9/3/2018 c49 12n2kas
I find it weird that Hades instantaneously knows how to use Naruto's body to it's full potential and not only that, but has enough information to affect Kurama's seal with magic and be able to channel his chakra. Also, where did Mavis disappear after leaving Naruto's mindscape?
12n2kasI find it weird that Hades instantaneously knows how to use Naruto's body to it's full potential and not only that, but has enough information to affect Kurama's seal with magic and be able to channel his chakra. Also, where did Mavis disappear after leaving Naruto's mindscape?
9/2/2018 c36 2n2kas
I know it's not right of me to say so, but I hope that Sakura dies a slow and painful death in a random ditch. Seriously she owes Naruto everything that she achieved in life so far and yet she orders him around like he's her property? Then she has the gall to say that Naruto's been doing nothing while "they" were working their asses to get him back when in reality all she's been doing is complain and dilly dally her flat ass around.
I know it's not right of me to say so, but I hope that Sakura dies a slow and painful death in a random ditch. Seriously she owes Naruto everything that she achieved in life so far and yet she orders him around like he's her property? Then she has the gall to say that Naruto's been doing nothing while "they" were working their asses to get him back when in reality all she's been doing is complain and dilly dally her flat ass around.
9/1/2018 c49 Nicok
Reading it from the first chapter to here, I can say you've definitely improved. Might be just me but the first chapter seems to need (IMO) work. Not storywise, but storytelling wise. But I'll tell you, I'm happy I kept reading. Else I would've missed this.
Reading it from the first chapter to here, I can say you've definitely improved. Might be just me but the first chapter seems to need (IMO) work. Not storywise, but storytelling wise. But I'll tell you, I'm happy I kept reading. Else I would've missed this.
8/31/2018 c49 Ezio55
I hope this story reaches alvarez arc. None of the Naruto/Fairy Tail stories I have read has gone past tartaros arc.
I hope this story reaches alvarez arc. None of the Naruto/Fairy Tail stories I have read has gone past tartaros arc.
8/30/2018 c1 Nicok
Hope the storytelling gets better than this. This chapter was basically "Someone said this" "Someone said that" "Someone did this" "Someone did that" I didn't even know if the streets were paved or not. Or that it was a port city. If I were to exaggerate I would also say that I didn't even know the place they were eating at was inside a building or not. Us, the readers don't have the details you have in your head so you have to communicate the surroundings and expressions of the characters in some way. The closest thing we got to an expression was the sweat drop. At the moment I can't say I like this story or if it will get better. But, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and keep reading.
Hope the storytelling gets better than this. This chapter was basically "Someone said this" "Someone said that" "Someone did this" "Someone did that" I didn't even know if the streets were paved or not. Or that it was a port city. If I were to exaggerate I would also say that I didn't even know the place they were eating at was inside a building or not. Us, the readers don't have the details you have in your head so you have to communicate the surroundings and expressions of the characters in some way. The closest thing we got to an expression was the sweat drop. At the moment I can't say I like this story or if it will get better. But, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and keep reading.
8/30/2018 c5 Naruhaku96
Personally I thought when juvia calling naruto Mr. Sun was cuter then naruto-sama
Personally I thought when juvia calling naruto Mr. Sun was cuter then naruto-sama