for The Fox Scroll3/26/2020 c10 Guest
And the fact that they were all from 400 years in the past, so the runes could be restricting those chronologically older than 80.
And the fact that they were all from 400 years in the past, so the runes could be restricting those chronologically older than 80.
2/27/2020 c35 JarredCarney
as crude as the comment is emotionally retarded is a very apt description of naruto due to his past regarding love, but I think socially retarded fits better. as always good chapter huh does that mean that naruto's friend will become fairy tail members I mean its not like their loyalty to konoha will effect it since naruto is the same and "the will of fire" embodies fairy tail to a T.
as crude as the comment is emotionally retarded is a very apt description of naruto due to his past regarding love, but I think socially retarded fits better. as always good chapter huh does that mean that naruto's friend will become fairy tail members I mean its not like their loyalty to konoha will effect it since naruto is the same and "the will of fire" embodies fairy tail to a T.
1/14/2020 c41 Jose19
Naruto is being made into a fool here because he can understand serious love if someone gets the message through him like Sakura did to help Hinata in the canon.
Naruto is dense but not stupid since he understood the feelings of Hinata, and accepted them.
Naruto is being made into a fool here because he can understand serious love if someone gets the message through him like Sakura did to help Hinata in the canon.
Naruto is dense but not stupid since he understood the feelings of Hinata, and accepted them.
1/14/2020 c36 Jose19
I personally despise Sakura in the actual canon to me Hinata was always superior as a woman than her.
I don’t mind the bashing of Sakura because she would be useless without Naruto, and Sasuke, and her fan girl obsession with the Uchiha is repulsive.
I personally despise Sakura in the actual canon to me Hinata was always superior as a woman than her.
I don’t mind the bashing of Sakura because she would be useless without Naruto, and Sasuke, and her fan girl obsession with the Uchiha is repulsive.
1/12/2020 c51 Guest
Cap 52?
Cap 52?
12/20/2019 c51 Guest
Great chapter and please update whenever you can.
Great chapter and please update whenever you can.
12/14/2019 c37 
1Mpower0438
I do not agree with how Sakura has been treating Naruto since she arrived at Fairy Tail. He shouldn't even apologize to her for not knowing about Hinata or playing around since that is how he always acts. She is mad he doesn't know about Hinata when Hinata has never done anything to show she loves him except confessing in a life or death situation and he was already starting to go into a frenzy so of course he would forget she even said anything to him. I may be biased though since I never liked Sakura's character and always thought Hinata shouldn't have ended up with Naruto since there is really no development between them unless you count the movie Naruto the Last which was really stupid in my opinion. Sorry for the rant I do enjoy the story but Sakura is being a grade a B in this story.
1Mpower0438I do not agree with how Sakura has been treating Naruto since she arrived at Fairy Tail. He shouldn't even apologize to her for not knowing about Hinata or playing around since that is how he always acts. She is mad he doesn't know about Hinata when Hinata has never done anything to show she loves him except confessing in a life or death situation and he was already starting to go into a frenzy so of course he would forget she even said anything to him. I may be biased though since I never liked Sakura's character and always thought Hinata shouldn't have ended up with Naruto since there is really no development between them unless you count the movie Naruto the Last which was really stupid in my opinion. Sorry for the rant I do enjoy the story but Sakura is being a grade a B in this story.
11/22/2019 c43 Landnothing
The only true couple here is naruto x lucy. The harem is just too forced for my liking. No good arguments for that happens.
The only true couple here is naruto x lucy. The harem is just too forced for my liking. No good arguments for that happens.
11/18/2019 c51 xSean
This was honestly a great fic but not gonna lie, the further I got into it the less excited I was to keep reading. That is all personal preference though.
The first reason why was as you could probably guess, the inclusion of more Naruto characters. I'm not a big fan of multiple Naruto characters starring in another crossover world. At first you done really well with it. They where there, you seen and acknowledged them but they weren't shoved down your throat or in your face 24/7.
That has changed in the last 10 or so chapters. They are beggining to take on more prominent roles and quite honestly a lot of the word count I would rather be used to further Naruto and his Journey. The best thing to come out of Konoha Shinobi appearing was Lee meeting Elfman and Sakura's totally in character (In my opinion) jealousy that Naruto might forget about them and stay in Earthland.
The second is Hades taking Naruto's body for his own. This is a concept I have never liked. Ever. Always feels like it drags on and I have a feeling this is going to be dragging on a while longer, with others coming into more prominent roles you have to write out everyones VS scenes aye?
I'm not sure if you plan to end the Fic sometime soon after Tenrou or if you are going to continue on past the time skip or what but I am hoping Konoha Shinobi take less of a role again and we never see something like Naruto losing control of his own body.
Like I said, all personal preference on my part. Still a great fic though, can't believe your 2 fics escaped me for so long. Credit to RekkingPride's favourite list for bringing me to here and your Naruto x Konosuba Fic!
This was honestly a great fic but not gonna lie, the further I got into it the less excited I was to keep reading. That is all personal preference though.
The first reason why was as you could probably guess, the inclusion of more Naruto characters. I'm not a big fan of multiple Naruto characters starring in another crossover world. At first you done really well with it. They where there, you seen and acknowledged them but they weren't shoved down your throat or in your face 24/7.
That has changed in the last 10 or so chapters. They are beggining to take on more prominent roles and quite honestly a lot of the word count I would rather be used to further Naruto and his Journey. The best thing to come out of Konoha Shinobi appearing was Lee meeting Elfman and Sakura's totally in character (In my opinion) jealousy that Naruto might forget about them and stay in Earthland.
The second is Hades taking Naruto's body for his own. This is a concept I have never liked. Ever. Always feels like it drags on and I have a feeling this is going to be dragging on a while longer, with others coming into more prominent roles you have to write out everyones VS scenes aye?
I'm not sure if you plan to end the Fic sometime soon after Tenrou or if you are going to continue on past the time skip or what but I am hoping Konoha Shinobi take less of a role again and we never see something like Naruto losing control of his own body.
Like I said, all personal preference on my part. Still a great fic though, can't believe your 2 fics escaped me for so long. Credit to RekkingPride's favourite list for bringing me to here and your Naruto x Konosuba Fic!
11/12/2019 c39 2Reem519
"Great! Naruto's probably going to set the island full of traps to prank us!" Natsu shouted as he tried to punch his way through the barriers. "It's the twenty-four-hour race all over again!" Lmfao!
2Reem519"Great! Naruto's probably going to set the island full of traps to prank us!" Natsu shouted as he tried to punch his way through the barriers. "It's the twenty-four-hour race all over again!" Lmfao!
11/11/2019 c4 Reem519
Natsu growled and jumped up. "I'm tired of sneaking around! That's Naruto's job!" Lmfao
Natsu growled and jumped up. "I'm tired of sneaking around! That's Naruto's job!" Lmfao