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10/15/2015 c1 Riac3
Overall, the whole chapter was solid and not a thing wrong with it from what I could tell. The process of how Kakashi and Kurenai came together could use a bit more explaining, although you could do that rather easily via flashbacks, or dialouge between the two. As for pairings? Oh please, oh please for the love of god, do not put him in a pairing of him and Sakura, Hinata, or Ino! I'm sorry if you like those pairings but I absolutely 'HATE' them. And it's pretty hard for me to hate something, anyway I saw that you had Samui selected as Naruto's pairing on the description. I wanted to ask if that was only temporary or if that was your preference. You don't have to if you don't want to, but personally I would like to see Naruto be paired up with Yugito. The only problem I can see with this being the age difference, but you could easily change that by making a few minor adjustments to the timeline of your story. You don't have to if you don't want to, so don't let me or anyone else force you into writing something that you don't want to. Either way, I'll be looking forward to your next chapter! Peace!
9/7/2015 c1 7Neava Kaeth
This is a great story so far I can't wait for the next chapter to be ready
8/30/2015 c1 Redxlord
Very well written story.
8/26/2015 c1 17the dark euphie
Oh the possibilities!I can't wait to see what you do with this.
8/25/2015 c1 1mo9711
Love this story already and the whole explanation you made for minato using naruto was pretty good and decently thought out HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY VERY WELL WRITTEND PLEASE CONTINUE TO UPDATE
8/24/2015 c1 1white-winds hunter
add karin to the pairing
8/18/2015 c1 4alucard77
Muy buen comienzo de la historia esta muy buena
8/18/2015 c1 9blood-hybrid-of-darkness96
I read the story you based this off of. Yours is both better written and more intriguing. I look forward to seeing where you take this and will be following it closely. Good luck. Ja Ne
8/17/2015 c1 kamui5
Very interesting liking it so far. Please update soon.
8/17/2015 c1 anarion87
nice so far. how about samui for a pairing
8/16/2015 c1 1Elder Sibling
This is interesting. Especially the way you described Naruto's appearance : silver hair with ruby eyes. Wonder if he would inherit his father's tardiness.
8/16/2015 c1 1Sunrisehime
oww next please
8/16/2015 c1 Rebmul
hopefully kushina and minato help protect Naruto it be cute if Naruto and Karin got together
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