for Tumbling Down the Twisted Path10/28/2016 c4 Arla Logan
Gripping story:) It's really interesting to read a historically-detailed story.
Gripping story:) It's really interesting to read a historically-detailed story.
18/25/2015 c4 Guest
I think I'd like to see more of how Nina is related to the X-men... There isn't very much of a connection. More action too, maybe? Plus, switching between the languages is annoying. Perhaps you could put it in English and tell the reader what language it was in.
That's all, I think! Please update soon:)
I think I'd like to see more of how Nina is related to the X-men... There isn't very much of a connection. More action too, maybe? Plus, switching between the languages is annoying. Perhaps you could put it in English and tell the reader what language it was in.
That's all, I think! Please update soon:)
8/17/2015 c2 chyanne200
Interesting. It something I never really seen before. I like that. Keep up the good work. I'll be looking forward to your next update.
Interesting. It something I never really seen before. I like that. Keep up the good work. I'll be looking forward to your next update.