Reviews: Aloha | FanFiction

for Aloha

8/13/2020 c1

1Bethesda551
I love this, freakin funny as hell

5/31/2020 c1 Bethesda551
lmao

8/22/2015 c1

66Phoebetales
Loved this. :-)

8/22/2015 c1 Guest
This is hilarious! Such a great job. Going back to read it again :)

8/21/2015 c1

8storyfan101
So funny, and such a fun read! I am so glad you shared.

8/21/2015 c1

5Snowbeardolphin
I like how you wrote this short story. I think the shocking part was when Grace realized what was actually going on between them.

8/20/2015 c1

88Irene Claire
This had me laughing - it was great! "... a mobile Aloha girl ..." Gawds, Danny's "fright"!

Is there a boar in camp ... LOL! Loved this!

8/20/2015 c1 stefrosacarnevale
Amazing story