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6/6/2023 c1 Guest
I am here as a guest but, I just wanted to say im fascinated with the way you wrote Naruto! I have been wanting to write a story about a neglected and abused Naruto because of he has no Chakra as well! It won’t be the same line of reasoning as yours but you have opened my eyes to a few things that I need to correct! So thank you for the indirect assistance! Oh and I won’t take any of your work or ideas. I personally find that appalling
2/26/2023 c1 DinoBillyJim
loved it and how long it was (pause) but in all seriousness great job and thank you for writing this and not making us have to pay for this lovely fanfic.
11/26/2022 c1 Hyperman15
The story became progressively less appealing as I read. I can’t finish it
3/15/2021 c1 qwerd
Żałuję że to przeczytałem. Jak sam początek miał jakiś sens, to z czasem było coraz gorzej. Strata czasu. Opowiadanie miało potencjał, ale po ucieczce Naruto to straciło resztkę sensowności.
11/22/2020 c1 god eater
for this type of fic, you shoudlve at least made naruto befriend the uchiha? like a companion perhaps
4/16/2020 c1 Guest
shit
9/23/2019 c1 Edocsiru
So much fanon nonsense here.. The whole Namikaze-Uzumaki-Hyuuga-Uchiha-Haruno nonsense, the "Sanin" bullshit.. This thing represents the worst clichés of this fandom.
10/2/2017 c1 Guest
Yeah, just wondering how tsunada could be surprised that minato abandoned naruto, when she was the one that suggested it at his birth., due to his so called chakra damage...Totally does not make any sense at all!
9/12/2017 c1 4Monster King
Great story I really liked it.
1/25/2017 c1 Guest
Well, that was a major disappointment. It had so much potential, but you threw it out the window in favor of lazy writing. Congratulations.
1/17/2017 c1 6my 2 guys
that was good keep the chapters coming
10/14/2016 c1 Nut-lik
I thought you were going to send them to skyrim or nirn (I forgot the name of the planet so if I got it wrong sorry)
8/18/2016 c1 Guest
Annoyingly cliche, too many times skips, grammar and vocabulary skills thrown out the window.. Seems you have no respect for readers.. I'm gone, get your nonexistent potential ass out of here dumbass.
2/27/2016 c1 my 2 guys
that was good keep the chapters coming
2/4/2016 c1 Guest
Holy shit
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