8/31/2015 c1 102Winter Leigh End
So, on the technical side, I'm not sure why nothing in this fic is properly capitalized. Names, beginnings of sentences, places, I, ect. If you're going for some sort of effect, it was lost on me unfortunately.

The way you describe how the weather affects Lysander's state of mind is really neat and I especially liked the scene where the sky's blotchy and stuff and it makes Lysander feel normal. It was interesting, I thought, because even though he described himself as feeling normal, from the paragraph that follows, it seems more like he feels like he's his brother or just optimistic in general. As when I think normal, I think...content. Or, maybe, bored or placated or something. Something mundane, in truth.

All in all, I really liked the build up to the end where Lysander's picturing his funeral and how it would go since he's no one to anyone beside his family and the grief he would cause his brother in particular.