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4/2 c1 8jukehero461
A good start, nice Dursley explanation, looking forward to more
8/3/2018 c1 2Nihatclodra
What I thik its that you should write more chapter for me to form a proper opinions on... but so far I'm liking it.
3/18/2018 c1 21edboy4926
Interesting intro
1/9/2018 c1 4RabbitRuler2
It's pretty good! I like it.
6/4/2016 c1 jlnorris75
Good story is this kinda going to be a dark Harry fic? Seems more serious then make a wish hope it is as good good luck
4/24/2016 c1 2mwinter1
interesting.
9/29/2015 c1 Swordhunter89
I hope this is as good as "Make a Wish"
9/17/2015 c1 7ajpa
I think you need better formatting or something. It certainly hurt my eyes to look at that chunk of text. On the other hand, that is also weird.
9/15/2015 c1 gaul1
Interesting start, needs more character development on Harry though. There was enough on Vernon, but his actual scene was taken by Harry, unless u use it in the future of the fic as a flashback or an aside., keep up the good work, byes
9/5/2015 c1 1Bobboky
very good work
9/2/2015 c1 KennyBenny
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8/29/2015 c1 2TheRazgrizDragon
Great start!
8/28/2015 c1 3frytrix
Considering the story so far has only lasted trough one scene/conversation and no other description on what he is planning or any other information at all about his character beside the fact he is leaving.
Do i so far not think to much of the story, next chapter will decide wether or not if i will be a follower of your story. The story has my interest for know tough.

Happy writing.

-F-
8/25/2015 c1 9M-python-girl
Darker, Edgier, make a wish... interesting.
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