for Resurgence of the Senju Clan8/12/2016 c11 
2Yagura's Sensei
Awsome chapter loved it especialy the fight that was epic and well done cant wait till next time XD
2Yagura's SenseiAwsome chapter loved it especialy the fight that was epic and well done cant wait till next time XD
8/8/2016 c10 CadmeanPanther
Great story, can't wait to see Naruto confront the Kiri shinobi but I'm wondering if you're going to have Naruto discover the Uzumaki Clan Mask Temple and discover his clan scrolls in Fuuinjutsu? Answer in the next chapter please.
Great story, can't wait to see Naruto confront the Kiri shinobi but I'm wondering if you're going to have Naruto discover the Uzumaki Clan Mask Temple and discover his clan scrolls in Fuuinjutsu? Answer in the next chapter please.
7/31/2016 c1 Guest
Great firat chapter, but aome revising is desperately needed to fix all the typos and bad sentences.
Great firat chapter, but aome revising is desperately needed to fix all the typos and bad sentences.
7/30/2016 c3 Deathwarder
Mate you should really work on your grammar! The only reason i am still reading this is because i know you can do better than this as i have read your other stories. Its really disappointing that you obviously dont care about this story as it way below your standard level. I hope you pick up the game in the next few chapters
Mate you should really work on your grammar! The only reason i am still reading this is because i know you can do better than this as i have read your other stories. Its really disappointing that you obviously dont care about this story as it way below your standard level. I hope you pick up the game in the next few chapters
7/30/2016 c1 Deathwarder
The story is good but dude work on your tenses. They are all over the place. You jump from past (which is the one that should be used) to present (which just sucks) for example It should be "Naruto's eyes opened slowly" instead of "naruto's eyes open slowly". if you work on that then the story is pretty good
The story is good but dude work on your tenses. They are all over the place. You jump from past (which is the one that should be used) to present (which just sucks) for example It should be "Naruto's eyes opened slowly" instead of "naruto's eyes open slowly". if you work on that then the story is pretty good
7/26/2016 c10 Rico1xl
no problem on my end for the pairing. If ur still looking for a sword how about the red queen from DMC4 or banryu from inuyasha.
no problem on my end for the pairing. If ur still looking for a sword how about the red queen from DMC4 or banryu from inuyasha.
7/1/2016 c2 sudhush
Good story man nicely done start and also progression. but man that team allotment was a major twist. good work
Good story man nicely done start and also progression. but man that team allotment was a major twist. good work