for Resurgence of the Senju Clan4/22/2016 c9 
1Lead99
I really like this story and hope that you continue to update. I really like how you slipped in that has Hiram and Naruto have a connection beside the mokotun (Asura) and I also like how Naruto doesn't just get things down instantly and has to really work for his results
1Lead99I really like this story and hope that you continue to update. I really like how you slipped in that has Hiram and Naruto have a connection beside the mokotun (Asura) and I also like how Naruto doesn't just get things down instantly and has to really work for his results
3/7/2016 c3 StayBlessed
I like the thought of Naruto using a large sword. In the new Naruto game, the way Hashirama uses swords and windmill shuriken is really awesome. Personally, I'm completely not into the Sasuke, Anko thing. Great fic so far though.
I like the thought of Naruto using a large sword. In the new Naruto game, the way Hashirama uses swords and windmill shuriken is really awesome. Personally, I'm completely not into the Sasuke, Anko thing. Great fic so far though.
3/6/2016 c9 1AntiCreator
I've read Birth of the Forest but I prefer this one to that. I prefer that Naruto is still Naruto and not actually Has hiragana like in that. Plus that story ain't been updated for time.
1AntiCreatorI've read Birth of the Forest but I prefer this one to that. I prefer that Naruto is still Naruto and not actually Has hiragana like in that. Plus that story ain't been updated for time.
3/6/2016 c7 AntiCreator
I'm glad Orochimaru is dead, for now at least. It means Sasuke will likely not leave the village now as there is nowhere to run to. It's just a shame Kabuto is still alive. I hated that man more and more as the manga went on and was so happy when itachi used Izanami on him. If Kabuto does continue to be an antagonist I hope it's on his own power instead of power he stole from his dead masters body.
I'm glad Orochimaru is dead, for now at least. It means Sasuke will likely not leave the village now as there is nowhere to run to. It's just a shame Kabuto is still alive. I hated that man more and more as the manga went on and was so happy when itachi used Izanami on him. If Kabuto does continue to be an antagonist I hope it's on his own power instead of power he stole from his dead masters body.
3/6/2016 c5 AntiCreator
I've got to agree with your AN at the start of this chapter. It puts me off a story if Sasuke is some privileged arsehole who demands that he receive anything he wants. One particularly annoying thing I've read more than once is that Naruto gets say, a sword. Sasuke sees it and likes it so demands that Naruto hand it to him. As you say, at the start of the manga and anime he was actually a friend to Naruto I'd say. Watch the coming on credits for the first few seasons and you can't deny that team 7 look like a team and friends in them.
I've got to agree with your AN at the start of this chapter. It puts me off a story if Sasuke is some privileged arsehole who demands that he receive anything he wants. One particularly annoying thing I've read more than once is that Naruto gets say, a sword. Sasuke sees it and likes it so demands that Naruto hand it to him. As you say, at the start of the manga and anime he was actually a friend to Naruto I'd say. Watch the coming on credits for the first few seasons and you can't deny that team 7 look like a team and friends in them.
3/2/2016 c4 PredatorPuck
you made a mistake! here you said Naruto wanted to eat after his mission cause he is hungry but after meeting Tsunade he immediately goes to train? C'mon! don't do so basic mistakes!
you made a mistake! here you said Naruto wanted to eat after his mission cause he is hungry but after meeting Tsunade he immediately goes to train? C'mon! don't do so basic mistakes!
2/28/2016 c9 marquis.shax
I gotta agree the story by Karldin is good but it hasn't been updated in a full year. So will Naruto be using the Rasenshuriken or will that dragon divine light be his ultimate jutsu? Also I wouldn't go with a buster sword that's just basically giving him Zabuza's weapon and a chakra saber is just changing Kakashi's blade from white to red. What you should give him is a modified version of Murasame (Akame's imperial arms blade from Akame Ga Kill) which is a Katana (although I doubt you want it to be an instant kill sword where with 1 hit it poisons the person to the point where their almost guaranteed to die within seconds lol)
I gotta agree the story by Karldin is good but it hasn't been updated in a full year. So will Naruto be using the Rasenshuriken or will that dragon divine light be his ultimate jutsu? Also I wouldn't go with a buster sword that's just basically giving him Zabuza's weapon and a chakra saber is just changing Kakashi's blade from white to red. What you should give him is a modified version of Murasame (Akame's imperial arms blade from Akame Ga Kill) which is a Katana (although I doubt you want it to be an instant kill sword where with 1 hit it poisons the person to the point where their almost guaranteed to die within seconds lol)