
4/23/2019 c12 Guest
Awesome more please
Awesome more please
2/25/2019 c11
3Diana9922
Yeah great fight awesome
When will we continue?
Yokuma does not really go with Naru.
It's much better Naruto and Ino or Naruto and Mei or Naruto and Ino and Mei but not with the other nor with Hinata tsss.

Yeah great fight awesome
When will we continue?
Yokuma does not really go with Naru.
It's much better Naruto and Ino or Naruto and Mei or Naruto and Ino and Mei but not with the other nor with Hinata tsss.
12/16/2018 c12 OriginalOtaku92
This is an awesome story and I was wondering if you're still in this site, when another chapter would come out? Also giving that if you're alive and well. (That was dark) hopefully, you're still kicking ass and disregarding questions! (I love that line)
This is an awesome story and I was wondering if you're still in this site, when another chapter would come out? Also giving that if you're alive and well. (That was dark) hopefully, you're still kicking ass and disregarding questions! (I love that line)
8/9/2018 c12
2lostxinxthexdarkness
It's been very enjoyable reading this story so far, I hope that you are able to overcome the writer's block that's currently plaguing you regarding this story. Keep up the great work!

It's been very enjoyable reading this story so far, I hope that you are able to overcome the writer's block that's currently plaguing you regarding this story. Keep up the great work!
6/7/2018 c12
3Asian Tinkerbell
Noooooooooooooooo! I know you said this isn’t abandoned but it’s been about a year now. Hopefully you find some inspiration to get into the swing of things. This fic is so amazing! I freaking love it. I really love how you portrayed both Sasuke and Naruto in this.

Noooooooooooooooo! I know you said this isn’t abandoned but it’s been about a year now. Hopefully you find some inspiration to get into the swing of things. This fic is so amazing! I freaking love it. I really love how you portrayed both Sasuke and Naruto in this.
1/16/2018 c8
12MindForged
I usually try not to get too up in arms about this sort of thing, but the notion that some random dude could just get off scot-free from getting hit by Chakra-Enhanced Strength is silly and annoying.

I usually try not to get too up in arms about this sort of thing, but the notion that some random dude could just get off scot-free from getting hit by Chakra-Enhanced Strength is silly and annoying.
1/15/2018 c5 MindForged
This is a great fic. But one slightly annoying thing in this chapter was the claim that Orochimaru has more chakra than Tsunade. He doesn't. As you can see on Naruto Wik, Tsunade's chakra level (4/5) was equal to Naruto's in Part 1, while Orochimaru's was a 3.5/5.
Kinda feel like Tsunade has been downplayed in this fic. Also, Naruto's Ninjustu rating seems like it should be much higher. At this point, he already could use 3 elements and medical ninjutsu. Specifically, the Mystical Palm Technique, which is rare, as according to the Databooks most medic-nin cannot use the technique. I mean your rating is barely higher than what canon Naruto was rated at the time (2.5/5). Eh, maybe I'm makinfg much ado over nothing.
This is a great fic. But one slightly annoying thing in this chapter was the claim that Orochimaru has more chakra than Tsunade. He doesn't. As you can see on Naruto Wik, Tsunade's chakra level (4/5) was equal to Naruto's in Part 1, while Orochimaru's was a 3.5/5.
Kinda feel like Tsunade has been downplayed in this fic. Also, Naruto's Ninjustu rating seems like it should be much higher. At this point, he already could use 3 elements and medical ninjutsu. Specifically, the Mystical Palm Technique, which is rare, as according to the Databooks most medic-nin cannot use the technique. I mean your rating is barely higher than what canon Naruto was rated at the time (2.5/5). Eh, maybe I'm makinfg much ado over nothing.
1/13/2018 c12 Guest
Cuando sus el proximo capitulo
Cuando sus el proximo capitulo
11/24/2017 c6 an0n
nice job... i see that BTS reference in your AN though :p
nice job... i see that BTS reference in your AN though :p
10/3/2017 c12
2gonzalo.flako
my friend this is another story of your creation that will go to my favorite list so great and in the course of history shows the abanse of the transmigrate potential of the children of the wise of the six way as the descendants of madara and hashirama with uzumaki blood. I already want to see how you handle the dance thing I would have against naruto for what he did to the uzumaki clan and sasuke when he learns that he gave the order for the massacre of the uchiha clan. I just hope you're up and coming soon.

my friend this is another story of your creation that will go to my favorite list so great and in the course of history shows the abanse of the transmigrate potential of the children of the wise of the six way as the descendants of madara and hashirama with uzumaki blood. I already want to see how you handle the dance thing I would have against naruto for what he did to the uzumaki clan and sasuke when he learns that he gave the order for the massacre of the uchiha clan. I just hope you're up and coming soon.